Great job on the MOC! Lots of stuff to like.
Since everyone else has already showered you with compliments over on MOCpages
, I will point out that you are still over-exposing your pictures way too much. Not sure what the reason is other than I assume you are using a photo-editing program to reduce contrast in order to clean up the background so that it's all white? If you aren't using photo-editing and it's still coming out this way, maybe your lighting is too harsh? I'm not really an expert, but I'd say that you could really benefit by trying to get the contrast levels worked out.
Hopefully that's helpful feedback.