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Snow

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 12:30 am
by Rick-Ricks
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The snow fell as I told her that her husband would not be coming home, as if the world itself was mourning with this woman. I had been told by those who had to do the same before me of some things to expect, but nothing prepared me for what came.

I told her I did everything I could to save her husband, and she just sat there in unbelief. After a while it seemed to register and her face turned cold, her screams of hatred towards me echoed through be courtyard.

I once survived being stabbed, but the pain was nothing compared the attack by this widow. I just sat there as she continued to hit me. She sobbed as fist after fist hit my chest. All I could do was tell her how sorry I was. And eventually the time between the hits grew longer until she eventually stopped all together and just fell to the ground.

She pulled her knees to her chest and cried.

Eventually a friend found her and took her from me to help her mourn.

I stood in that courtyard for what seemed like an eternity before I worked up the strength to leave.


It's about time I posted this on the forum.
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Re: Snow

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:07 am
by Sir Bragallot
Ah, the darker side of war. Nicely done.

Re: Snow

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:24 pm
by Purple Wolf
Very nice. The build is well done and the story was good as well. You really made it look like real snow.

Purple Wolf :)

Re: Snow

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:35 pm
by Justin M
Your version of snow is very realistic.

Re: Snow

Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:57 pm
by Aeridian
Mhm, yeah, the times men have rushed needlessly into war, forgetting the cost and the wounds they will inflict. Well done, it's not often we see the haunting side of it.

Re: Snow

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 12:33 am
by Rick-Ricks
Thanks for the comments everyone, I wanted to show a darker side of war and create a MOC showing some realistic snow while using simplistic techniques. I'm hoping I succeeded.
-Ricks