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Luke stood above his prey posed to leap down and strike right as he passed underneath him.
Luke held his breath as the man crossed underneath him, then leaped and crashed on top of him. They barrel rolled for a while then Luke came out on top with his dagger posed to kill, but the face that greeted him stopped him cold.
"Hello..Brother" it said. Luke could make no response he was stunned.

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