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LCC..War weary
Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 7:59 pm
by Luke the Swift~
Luke and his brave men are returning home from a long tour in Loreas , war weary.
additional photos
the family members atop the wall.
I tried to use as many dif expressions as I could
Some of the rangers in an outlying watch tower
view of the whole wall
one more outlook.
Re: LCC..War weary
Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 8:52 pm
by soccerkid6
Neat build, I like your crenelations and archer slits. I think the door being a different color like brown would be better than bley as it looks like part of the wall, or you could replace the door with a portcullis. I also think that making the entrance larger would help as there is no way those guys are going to fit through on their horses right now. Excellent tree in the foreground, I think this is one of your best builds yet
Re: LCC..War weary
Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 9:19 pm
by Luke the Swift~
Thank you for your kind words and also for your tips
Re: LCC..War weary
Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 9:21 pm
by AK_Brickster
^ Pretty much what Soccerkid said. At first glance, I thought they were just walking straight at the wall. Didn't realize that archway was a door until I looked a 2nd time.
Keep up the good work!
Re: LCC..War weary
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 6:03 pm
by Velliscig
Neat scene... soccerkid has a point on that door; i'll say it looks more like a sally port than a gate, but the wall looks good.
and perhaps i'm just ocd about fleshies but mixing them with yellow, not the best idea... overall nice scene though.