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LCC GCV: You're late

Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 7:41 pm
by mpoh98
Here is my entry for GC5, Group "A": Your Late, Parts 1 - 3

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Part 1 - Prison
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Part 2 - Kole to the Rescue
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Part 3 - Escape
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So here is my entry into the GCV. I did not get to build what I fully wanted to, since life and school took over. :cry:

All three scenes were actually built on 1 baseplate! Here is one picture showing you how. Go to my flickr for more pictures of the build.
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GCV: Overview by mpoh98, on Flickr


Enjoy! Soli Deo Gloria!

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 9:12 pm
by Bricknave
Wow, lovely stonework and rockwork! Having all three scenes on one baseplate is really clever. My favorite scene is the wall climbing one; the climbing action and use of green tiles is a nice touch. :)

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 9:33 pm
by Justin M
Wow, awesome job Matthew! It's neat how they all fit together. :)

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 2:00 am
by mpoh98
Bricknave wrote:Wow, lovely stonework and rockwork! Having all three scenes on one baseplate is really clever. My favorite scene is the wall climbing one; the climbing action and use of green tiles is a nice touch. :)
Thanks Bricknave! That is my favorite scene as well!
Justin M wrote:Wow, awesome job Matthew! It's neat how they all fit together. :)
Thank you Justin!

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 2:24 am
by Aeridian
Great work Matt! Having all the parts connected is a really neat idea. :)

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 1:51 pm
by soccerkid6
I like the rockwork and wall texture in the first build, the second build has great texturing in the wall and I like the round tower in the corner. Excellent rockwork in the third build, the tilted sections especially. There are a few things I think could be improved: where you widened the round tower with inverted slopes there are gaps, here is a pic showing one way of solving that:
(built by ZCerberus)
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Also the third scene wall design looks a little odd to me, the sand green looks a little odd when used in a regular pattern, I think it work better scattered through the wall to show moss. The tudor sections are a neat idea and look alright, but removing the tan bits and give the roofs a steeper slant would improve them in my opinion. Overall three very good builds :)

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 7:08 pm
by mpoh98
Aeridian wrote:Great work Matt! Having all the parts connected is a really neat idea. :)
Thanks Aeridian!
soccerkid6 wrote:I like the rockwork and wall texture in the first build, the second build has great texturing in the wall and I like the round tower in the corner. Excellent rockwork in the third build, the tilted sections especially. There are a few things I think could be improved: where you widened the round tower with inverted slopes there are gaps, here is a pic showing one way of solving that:
(built by ZCerberus)
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Also the third scene wall design looks a little odd to me, the sand green looks a little odd when used in a regular pattern, I think it work better scattered through the wall to show moss. The tudor sections are a neat idea and look alright, but removing the tan bits and give the roofs a steeper slant would improve them in my opinion. Overall three very good builds :)
Thank you Isaac for the critique, I will use them in the future. :D

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 7:56 pm
by Sir Erathor
I really like this series of builds, though would agree with those who've mentioned that the sand green could be more spread out. I really admire your building style, and your MOCs just keep getting better! :D

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 11:15 pm
by SSchmidt
Very, very nice builds. I am impressed.
I am one of those that actually does not mind the sand green. I don't know that it meshes well with the light tan at the top of the wall, but I still think it looks pretty good. I realize in a traditional castle wall the Sand green wouldn't be in uniformity, but I still ike it ;)

By the way, it should be "You're late" as opposed to "Your late."

When your builds look this good, I have to nitpick on something :D It makes me feel better :lol:

Re: LCC GCV: Your late

Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:30 pm
by mpoh98
Sir Erathor wrote:I really like this series of builds, though would agree with those who've mentioned that the sand green could be more spread out. I really admire your building style, and your MOCs just keep getting better! :D
Thank you!
SSchmidt wrote:Very, very nice builds. I am impressed.
I am one of those that actually does not mind the sand green. I don't know that it meshes well with the light tan at the top of the wall, but I still think it looks pretty good. I realize in a traditional castle wall the Sand green wouldn't be in uniformity, but I still ike it ;)

By the way, it should be "You're late" as opposed to "Your late."

When your builds look this good, I have to nitpick on something :D It makes me feel better :lol:
Thanks SSchmidt! Glad you like it! Oops, fixed.