Prototype Elven Watchtower

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Prototype Elven Watchtower

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I was playing around with some tree elements and decided to attempt to build a structure for my Wood Elf faction. I came up with this:

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I decided that I wanted to do the structure a bit differently than a usual tree house-style build à la Forestmen and went with something that seemed a bit smooth and more organic. I thought that keeping it open-air and using the dish pieces for the roof helped to accomplish this.

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I apologize for the poor image quality.

Any suggestions for how to improve the build? Feedback is appreciated!
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I really like the dish plates as roof pieces- it achieves exactly the quality you were looking for. I would suggest adding smaller dishes- this piece: http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItem.asp?P=4740 on top of the larger dishes to really finish out the smooth look of the roof. Either way, I like this, and I think it's a nice build!
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I think I might even have some of those laying around. Thanks for the feedback!
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Lovin' the use of the dishes!
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Cool idea and it looks great! Makes me think of giant toadstools/mushrooms; great for an Elf hideout.
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Ronin Dragonslayer wrote:Cool idea and it looks great! Makes me think of giant toadstools/mushrooms; great for an Elf hideout.
My thought exactly. If you're remaking it I'd probably try and make the platform less square, as it loses the smoothness of the dishes.
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Where is the tower going to be located? We can give you some ideas relating foliage and what not. Is it going to be in a forest (I assume)?
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Cool tower! Very elf-ish! I suggest adding some of those new white Arabian-style arches. They work great for elves.

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Nice start with this! I agree with royalbrickcustoms and SSchmidt. The arches would work great, and if this is in a forest, we can give you tips on foliage. ANY foliage I think would help this as well. :)
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Like everyone else I think foliage white arches and better photos would make this really cool! Nice start dude!
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Thanks for all the suggestions! Here's some pictures of an updated version:

I used some rounded corner pieces on the front of the platform:

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And here are some smaller dishes on top to create a more rounded appearance.

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I would love to hear some of the suggestions you all have for foliage. Also, is this the arch piece you suggested, royalbrickcustoms? http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItem.asp?P=88292

Thanks again for all the suggestions.
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It's amazing how a little tweak in the structure can improve the build. I believe it looks much better now.

As far as foliage, the suggestions would vary as to where the tower is. Is it in a dense forest? A cleared section of forest?
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I agree with SSchmidt, it is already looking better! As far as foliage, it would really help to know where this is located. I would say though that dark green foliage would work well with the Dark brown. :)
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I'm imagining a relatively dense forest. I would have throw in some brick-built trees, but being at uni currenly, I'm with a small percentage of my usual building resources. I'm still open to any suggestions for foliage.
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I feel quite confident Gary (Caelan on the forum) won't mind me linking some of his builds. In our LCC roleplaying game, he is a noteworthy builder, and some of his best work (I feel) involves creating dense environments. Let me link you two that come to mind.

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Defense of Little Round Top, Overview by Gary^The^Procrastinator, on Flickr

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Lenfel Scout Snipers: Taking Down A War Elephant by Gary^The^Procrastinator, on Flickr

I think both of these give two different interpretations of somewhat dense foliage. They could serve as a suitable starting point in creating the environment around your elven watchtower.
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