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LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby ludzik » Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:08 am

After cutting through the patrol sir Kejtar thought he was out of the woods. There was no pursuit in sight and he was ready to find a spot to camp for the night. Suddenly he heard a whoooshing sound and the ground around him went ablaze. A dragon.... a flippin dragon!!!!! The deadly dance ensued... Sir Kejtar ended up dismounting to be a bit more nimble and to save his horse from certain death. He threw two short spears and ended up bring down the dragon to the ground. Without waiting for the dazed beast to come to he stepped in and slashed at the neck....

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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby mpoh98 » Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:09 am

Very interesting, fantastic story! I think if you went more in depth in the story, since if 2 spears could bring down a dragon, dragons would not be so feared. ;) Other than that, nice job! your flying through these!
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby ludzik » Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:24 am

mpoh98 wrote:Very interesting, fantastic story! I think if you went more in depth in the story, since if 2 spears could bring down a dragon, dragons would not be so feared. ;) Other than that, nice job! your flying through these!

I got only few days before I'll be traveling for the rest of the month... so I need to get them in fast in order to maximize on my points for the month :) Last month I missed out on one of the free builds :( I just ran out of time..... so when I have a moment I build and at times I reuse parts (since he's traveling through the same territory, part of the ground could be reused :D ).

Btw, you're right - I kind of breezed through that so here's the rest of it :)

The dragon was surprised to see the lone warrior challenge him. How dare he... along with his steed he should be his main course and dessert! Emboldened he flew in a bit too close and the two spears knocked him from his flight path as they caught him at the most vulnerable moment - while he was turning. Being so close to the ground he hit it hard and just as he was ready to spring back up in the air his opponent whom he grossly underestimated was on top of him and with almost inhuman strength plunged the elven lance right between the scales on the neck.
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby Sir Erathor » Wed Mar 05, 2014 6:03 am

'A flippin dragon!!!' LOL! :roflol:

Great work buddy! :)
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby jman44 » Thu Mar 06, 2014 6:14 am

Cool story but for the build I would try and spend more time on making it the best you can as it is a Guild build which is meant for improving your work. Food for thought :)
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby Brickninja » Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:23 am

This is good, but the build looks kind of cut-off. Probably because with the photo, you zoomed way in and the actual MOC part and cut off part of it. I would have the entire build shown with a reasonable sized border of white background on any give side if I were you, if that makes sense. If you can improve presentation skills, then your MOCs would look really good :D ! Just trying to provide some constructive criticism.
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby ludzik » Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:15 am

Brickninja wrote:This is good, but the build looks kind of cut-off. Probably because with the photo, you zoomed way in and the actual MOC part and cut off part of it. I would have the entire build shown with a reasonable sized border of white background on any give side if I were you, if that makes sense. If you can improve presentation skills, then your MOCs would look really good :D ! Just trying to provide some constructive criticism.

Did you see rest of the photos?
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby Brickninja » Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:27 am

Oh, cool! No, I hadn't seen them before, I just saw them now, that looks a lot better. Great job! :)
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby ludzik » Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:31 am

Brickninja wrote:Oh, cool! No, I hadn't seen them before, I just saw them now, that looks a lot better. Great job! :)

No worries :). I was going for the dramatic look with the first pic ;)
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby Luke the Swift~ » Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:14 pm

Forgot to post here. Good job!
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Re: LCC - Heroes Guild -J2 - and into the fire -Lenfald

Postby Justin M » Fri Mar 07, 2014 3:13 pm

Awesome job man! I always love seeing the "classic" dragon being used. :)
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