001 Midnight attack

Graynar · Post by **Graynar** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 5:13 pm

Hey guys!

To celebrate my 200th post I have this: 001 the final moc of my pretend theme. The begining of this story.

001 Midnight attack: All three factions are in this set. Fighting over the treasure contained in this abandoned keep. This set includes, 2 lion soldiers, 2 Dragon Masters, 2 Shadow Knights, and the Guardian of the treasure.(the red knight)

Mr.Delish said it had to much action, so I had another look at the prototype, and removed 3 figures, catapult and rock launcher. It looks better know i think. I added more debris and rubble like boses said. I even made some parts of the keep look damaged. I hope you guys like it. I hope it lives up to the expectations of Mr Delish, if not, I'll have to do better next time.

The overall set. ( I hope the pic isn't to big.)

http://photos22.flickr.com/34337694_3541ac02a5_b.jpg

An overhead pic: http://photos21.flickr.com/34337695_0cbf777000.jpg?v=0

The inside: http://photos21.flickr.com/34337696_1a1b51acf7.jpg?v=0

The entire set, minus the action: http://photos32.flickr.com/35618885_4f2509cefe.jpg?v=0

And if you want to compare it to the original: http://photos23.flickr.com/34264580_8c516fc05f.jpg?v=0

There you go, stay tuned for my next theme.

Comments criticism welcome!

TheOrk · Post by **TheOrk** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 7:12 pm

Why can't you just go and a get a job at TLG??? Then the world will be a better place for all of us

I prefer the version with less action. The building has a great design but is far too small for such a large number of minifigs with all that equipment. I like how the inside of the abandoned keep has all those rooms that are so big. Great job!

Dragonlord Esq. · Post by **Dragonlord Esq.** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:57 pm

It looks like New Orleans. That's probably just me though. Great set. I'd by it.

lil Jon · Post by **lil Jon** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:25 pm

Nice work. I like the second take with not so much action better.

The red knight looks a lot better with a light gray visor.

eNiGMa · Post by **eNiGMa** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:59 pm

Big improvement this time, me likey. You should seriously get a job with Lego!

venvorskar · Post by **venvorskar** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:10 pm

eNiGMa wrote:You should seriously get a job with Lego!

I agree.

That was a good MOC, and I liked it better without a lot of action.

MrDelish · Post by **MrDelish** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:21 pm

The building is good, but the clutter outside looks as though it has no coherent purpose.

ninja edit: I didn't even look at your entire post and I just saw your comment about me

edit edit: I dunno, it just doesn't feel right to me, with or without the figures.

it's not just because it's yours, Graynar

TheOrk · Post by **TheOrk** » Sun Aug 21, 2005 8:43 pm

MrDelish wrote:The building is good, but the clutter outside looks as though it has no coherent purpose.

ninja edit: I didn't even look at your entire post and I just saw your comment about me

edit edit: I dunno, it just doesn't feel right to me, with or without the figures.

it's not just because it's yours, Graynar

I can agree with that. The outside part is alittle messy but if this was a real set I probley would "edit" the entire thing to suit my purposes. Maybe make the yard alittle more organised.(but it is a ruined keep)

Graynar · Post by **Graynar** » Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:44 am

The building is good, but the clutter outside looks as though it has no coherent purpose.

ninja edit: I didn't even look at your entire post and I just saw your comment about me

edit edit: I dunno, it just doesn't feel right to me, with or without the figures.

it's not just because it's yours, Graynar

One day Mister Delish, I will make you happy!

The cluttering is due to the damage and erosion of the building and wall. I'm sure if this were a real set, TLG would remove the debris and half the minifigs.

You win some, you lose some. Thanks for the comments guys!

Graynar