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Alley... :)

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well here is the alley

the whole thing
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the path and side
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the shops
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any commens are welcome :D
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It's cool - seems a little more like a market than an alley though... maybe make the roofs sloped or really high, so you get that "canyon" feel.

I like the hookman - that is sweet.
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thanks for the advise

thanks
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Post by Graynar »

I agree with ottoatm, your roofs need a bit more work. But the figs you used are quite good, and I see Mr.Nate's sig fig is back again. :wink:

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he is school shopping :D in the alley/market
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babyjawa wrote:he is school shopping :D in the alley/market
Nice. :D
Good moc, though I agree with ottoam, it doesn't have that 'alley' feel without taller buildings or roofs.

I do like the path.

I would try to add more hustle and bustle, give it more of a busy feel. If you have enough people, you could turn it into a 'where's Nate' MOC. :D
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It's nice! I like the jewel shop, and the hook-handed-man behind it. Whenever you have enough bricks, you might consider adding more to it, and make a long street filled with shops.
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yeah but I made it in a hurry so...

thanks though
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Hey,

The scene is nice but the booths themselves are a little plain. I think it would help if they were different heights and maybe if you could angle the plates for the roofs to make them sloped.

Hmm, does Nate need to buy some jewels for his digital media literacy class or for his intro to philosophy class?

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no I am not finished with this moc reallty :oops: I just did something and showed it I am going to add on to it just wait
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Bruce N H wrote:Hmm, does Nate need to buy some jewels for his digital media literacy class or for his intro to philosophy class?
Both. Gotta bribe the teachers with something. Apples today just won't cut it. :wink:

Jawa: It's a good start. I like the figs. I agree a sloped roof would look better.
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