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Roaring Sun... part 2

Postby Quickblade22 » Sun May 13, 2007 3:33 am

Hey all,
Part two of my epic story is up on my website. Check out Courage Chosen at http://quickblade22.tripod.com/id7.html .
Make sure you read part one if you haven't already. Questions and comments welcome.
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Postby Prince Imdol » Sun May 13, 2007 12:40 pm

It does move a little fast in some parts, so I suggest slowing it down, but thats just the kind of writing I like to read, and it really depends on who you are. I like it to be slow and sweet, except in battle scenes.


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Postby Quickblade22 » Wed May 16, 2007 10:34 pm

Yea, it does seem to go fast in some parts. The reason is that when I began writing this story, it was supposed to take place about 24 years after the events you are reading. So essentially, I have 24 years of events to lead up to. I have an outline for it, but have only about 1 "chapter" worth of material written. Thanks for taking the time.
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Postby Prince Imdol » Wed May 16, 2007 10:38 pm

You have a cool story coming. Can't Wait.


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Postby DARKspawn » Sat May 26, 2007 3:02 am

Great so far (haven't read Chapter 3 yet) I like how it is more dialouge driven than narrative. Can't wait for the pics :)
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