Hey all,
Part two of my epic story is up on my website. Check out Courage Chosen at http://quickblade22.tripod.com/id7.html .
Make sure you read part one if you haven't already. Questions and comments welcome.
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Roaring Sun... part 2
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Roaring Sun... part 2
by Quickblade22 » Sat May 12, 2007 10:33 pm
Chief Smithy of Brick Forge
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I buy LEGO, I play with LEGO, therefore LEGO are not for children, they are for me!
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by Prince Imdol » Sun May 13, 2007 7:40 am
It does move a little fast in some parts, so I suggest slowing it down, but thats just the kind of writing I like to read, and it really depends on who you are. I like it to be slow and sweet, except in battle scenes.
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Thomas C.
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
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by Quickblade22 » Wed May 16, 2007 5:34 pm
Yea, it does seem to go fast in some parts. The reason is that when I began writing this story, it was supposed to take place about 24 years after the events you are reading. So essentially, I have 24 years of events to lead up to. I have an outline for it, but have only about 1 "chapter" worth of material written. Thanks for taking the time.
Chief Smithy of Brick Forge
I buy LEGO, I play with LEGO, therefore LEGO are not for children, they are for me!
I buy LEGO, I play with LEGO, therefore LEGO are not for children, they are for me!
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Quickblade22 - 22 times da man
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by Prince Imdol » Wed May 16, 2007 5:38 pm
You have a cool story coming. Can't Wait.
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P.I
Thomas C.
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
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Prince Imdol - Master
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