It does move a little fast in some parts, so I suggest slowing it down, but thats just the kind of writing I like to read, and it really depends on who you are. I like it to be slow and sweet, except in battle scenes.
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
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