Prince Imdol wrote:They think it is not gory enough.
Prince Imdol wrote:These are comments on our school online blog for our English Class.
"This whole chapter is just too cheesy."
"Thomas you need to learn to be succinct."
"Ya.....Wheres the gore?"
While some of the comments I get are constructive, others are just bad, bland, and mean.
venvorskar wrote:I think that you should try to publish it if you can. It sounds like something that could be successful. I do think, however, that it is like a lot of other fantasy books already written.
Are you planning to include the illustrations in the published version?
Ulvaron sounds like a good name to me, and very different from Ulmarad. Its mainly how you pronounce it. Its pronounced "Ulveren." But Ulvaron looked better.
I think Breylen is fine. You could say the same about many of my names.
I know there are a lot of fantasy books out there, but that wont stop me.
Also, how did you like my excerpt from Nightfall?
Prince Imdol wrote: I hope I can get it published!
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