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Pass on poem!

Post by Barbapple »

This is a pass-on poem. I will start it, and then whomever wants may contenue.
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LEGO castle marches,
towards their final fate,
untill they arive,
at the spacer gate,

The drums of war are beeting,
The soldiers draw their swords,
They march for,
Sava, Lenny, and lego lords,

They have finally made it,
they have met their place,
They have made it,
face to face with space,

The falcons mount their horses,
Foristers draw their bows,
And the dragons fly above,
to deal begining blows,

The spacers bring out cannons,
Lazors and blacktrons,
how they make their army?
It is simple spawns,

Fright nights lead the charge,
Dragon masters strike,
The spacers deal something,
castle will not like,

The spacers launch a missle,
their very first attack,
Falcons scream in horror,
There is no more wolf-pack.

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The poem will be contenued bye anyone who wants to!
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Post by porschecm2 »

Hey Brian, that's not too bad.
I kind of like it.
Maybe you will start a fad. :wink:

And I'm no poet, and I know it, so I'll pass. :wink:

Cm2

P.S. You might want to run it through a spell checker.
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Post by erikut »

The spacers laught in joy
but the castle did not give up
they sent out Savas dragons
and the spacers almost loosed

hows that???

eeh really bad :?
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Post by Loneranger »

dude. a poem is like a drum beat. you gotta keep up =P. BTW, great poem barb :-)
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Post by forester3291 »

erikut wrote:The spacers laught in joy
but the castle did not give up
they sent out Savas dragons
and the spacers almost loosed

hows that???

eeh really bad :?

How bout this

The spacers laghed in joy
But the Castlers did not give in
They sent out Savas dragon toy
And melted the spacers skin
Space rocks.
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Post by erikut »

heyy thats really cool. much better than mine
lets say i dont have a gift in poem wtiting. :oops:
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Post by forester3291 »

Thanks Erikut. I'm not much a poet myself. Back to the subject


The spacers retreated to fight another day
And the Castlers said,That's quit okay
But little did they know of the spacers evil plan
To reconstruct the D eathStar And kick the Castlers can.
Space rocks.
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Post by Mr. D »

Then came the spacers,
The ones with cannon on posts,
But laser can do nothing
Against un-deads and ghosts.

With the infantry, It did horrible work
And many a Falcon lay dead.
Yet the soldiers keep on coming
And the spacers all shiver with dread.

There weapons are for modern foes,
Not suited to old tactics,
And the knights of the holy LEGO order
Make lasers seem like pine-sticks.
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Post by Lord_Of_The_LEGO »

This is more of a story, and so I am moving this thread to the Stories Forum.


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Adm'ral Sandlin came a comin'
Upon the feild 'o war
As cav'lrymen came runnin'
And leaped into the gore

DragonStar 'twas ready
Ne'er did a horseman look
Upon the plastic horror
The spaceship there would brook

And so the Wave Gun fired
And so the Horsemen turned
To smokin' bits of ABS
A fate they all did earn!

The One they call Majisto
He led the bloody charge
And launched a lightning bolt
up towards the heav'nly barge

The Adm'ral he said,
"Shields up! Our lives they cannot take!"
But came the 'lectric beam
Destruction it dared make!

Into the bow'ls of the spaceship,
The cosmic matter bore
And on the bridge where Adm'ral sat
Straight through the floor it tore!

The castlers down there watched
As the explosion blasted CRASH!
They'd turned the pride 'o the fleet
To a smoking pile of ash.

Oh well GA. You were a martyr to the cause.
"Alright Kif, let's show these freaks what a bloated, runaway military budget can do"
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But wait here comes more spacers
Han,Chewie,and Luke
The Castleers stand no chance
Against them(I think I shall puke)

But no fear my friends
Here comes a brave Knight
He'll make this an even fight
And Majisto for Dragon Masters Sends
Space rocks.
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But even as the brave DMs arrived,
There appeared an ugly old witch,
Some doubted if she even alive,
(But only until she gave them a seven-year itch.)

She pulled out her want, and pointed it up,
At the spacers, as they tried to phaze them.
She shouted, "you silly young pups"
Just watch how magic can raze 'em!"

But before the old witch could pull out her wand,
The spacers began to retreat,
Though brave and well-armed, they could not stand,
Against her face, as ugly as the stink of her feet.
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But before she could act
Against it, I might say
A hover-tank let loose
And melted her away.

The Dragon Masters fled the field
To fight another day
But as they left a game
of Cat-And-Mouse would play.

Out of the brush came lasers,
Phasers and Frap Guns
And soon the battle was over
Just as soon as it'd begun.

The PCS Marines they went
And toasted up their host
But soon enough they'd get to feel
The fate they hated most.

As Dragons flying in the sky
Their armor strong as steel
Their fire roasted pretty good
Their Space Marine Meal.
"Alright Kif, let's show these freaks what a bloated, runaway military budget can do"
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