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Postby LORD DOOM » Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:30 am

Great work Graynar. I can't wait to read more. My favorite character is the crownie with the plant for a helmet. :)
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Postby Sir Kohran » Fri Aug 01, 2008 1:42 pm

Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming :)

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary? :?

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Postby Graynar » Fri Aug 01, 2008 4:34 pm

Thanks for the replies everyone! They are greatly appreciated! :D

Sir Kohran wrote:Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming :)

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary? :?

- Matt


Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive then the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter. :?

Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead. :P
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Postby Sir Kohran » Fri Aug 01, 2008 9:27 pm

Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive


It just took me out of the flow of the story for a little bit; it didn't seem in keeping with your style up until then. Not a big deal.

the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter.


Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.

Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead.


:lol:

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Postby LORD DOOM » Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:55 am

You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.

Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?
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Postby Graynar » Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:16 am

Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.


True, true. :P

You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.


Haha, glad you liked it!

Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?


I don't intend on stopping, but I will be unable to work on it for the rest of August. Unfortunately, 10 hour days at work are eating up all my time. But I should continue again full time in September. :wink:
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Postby siabur » Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:52 am

Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

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Postby Graynar » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:34 am

siabur wrote:Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

Niki


Hey, thanks for the reply! :D

I use a free downloadable photoshop called the Gimp for all my special effects and picture editing and I use MS Paint for the speech bubbles and text.
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Postby Graynar » Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:51 am

Good news guys, you can watch the General Nobalz trailer on Youtube!

http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=-3er67f5Ey0

Hope you enjoy it! :D
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Postby Lewa Rocks » Tue Sep 30, 2008 3:05 am

These are really good! I love them! Nobalz lol!
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Re: The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

Postby Graynar » Fri Apr 03, 2009 12:34 am

Here is chapter 3 guys! Hope you enjoy it! Also note, like the other chapters, there is some swearing.

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Comments are appreciated!
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Re: The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

Postby Sir Kohran » Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:16 am

Very nice work! I'm too lazy to be specific about what I liked :tasty: but it was a nice read and the illustrations are very rich. I hope you keep at it.

PS: I don't know why but I really liked the big clock in the outpost room.
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Re: The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

Postby knightarmour » Fri May 01, 2009 11:50 am

lego in a comic
revolutionary.
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Re: The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

Postby outcast » Mon May 04, 2009 8:21 am

This is a great story. Its hilarious.

B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim. :?
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Re: The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

Postby Graynar » Mon May 04, 2009 4:22 pm

Thanks for the replies everyone!

B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim.


Wow that sucks...I didn't even recieve a message that it had been removed -I had no idea is was gone. Soon I won't have any videos left on Youtube. :lol:
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