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Chapter 4 is 'Finally' finished....

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What did you think of chapter 4 ??

I liked it alot !!!
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71%
It was alright...
3
21%
....Boring....
1
7%
 
Total votes : 14

Chapter 4 is 'Finally' finished....

Postby Legolas » Tue Jul 06, 2004 11:37 am

and It only took me what six months......yea I know I need to get my butt in gear :P

anyways....

Heres it is:

Chapter IV ~ A Dark Ritual

Hope it was worth waiting for....... :?

Feedback is always appreciated :)

-- Joey

EDIT: Just wanted to add that Chapter 5 'might' be done by the end of the month, but I'm not making any promises.... :wink:
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Postby Formendacil » Tue Jul 06, 2004 5:35 pm

Story looks good.

I think the pictures are a bit too dark to consistently hold attention. Makes it typically hard to see.
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Postby Barbapple » Tue Jul 06, 2004 6:38 pm

Dude...
This is sweet....
I really liked it! I think the dark pictures added to it!
I love how you put the two plumes together to make 'claws'
Great work man!
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Postby Robin Hood » Thu Jul 08, 2004 11:44 pm

At first, it was bit hard to understand and a bit boring, but once I read it for a bit, got into it. Great Job. THe pictures though could use a bit of work but still good. :wink:
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Postby erikut » Sat Jul 17, 2004 7:50 pm

i said it before and i sayit again it rocks (i was the first one to read it muahahaha)
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Postby wlister » Sat Jul 17, 2004 8:30 pm

Nicely done. I too really like the two plumes for claws. I think the darkness of the pictures adds to the mood of the story, so keep it up.

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Postby Sir Troy of Linebaugh » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:44 pm

I say there, well done Legolas :) That chapter was very good and I can't wait for the next. The suspense is great. I look forward to reading your story in it's whole when it's finnished. I like the character with the red armour also. Once again it was very good :D
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Postby Dragon Master » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:46 pm

Good job, nice story...

Don't use clone brick! :wink:
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Postby Luís » Tue Jul 20, 2004 4:49 pm

Legolas, I only have one thing to say.
Traitor!!!! You used a megablocks shield.
:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:
Shelved bricks(???)
You know you're a good person when you see megablocks and have to do things you would rather not.
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Postby wlister » Tue Jul 20, 2004 6:37 pm

I think the use of clone bricks in the story adds some character. For all our complaints about Megabloks, they have started making a fairly decent series with the Dragon line. They may not fit as well together and the plastic might be cheaper, but the set and part design have some definite visual qualities lacking in TLC's designs over the last few years. Besides, not everyone is rich annd can afford to be exclusive about their brick buying. Megabloks is certainly a cost effective alternative. So back off on the bashing unless you want to drop the coin to help him become a purist.

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Postby Formendacil » Tue Jul 20, 2004 7:32 pm

You know, I never even noticed that there were MBs in the story. They must have been blended fairly well.

Good job then, I assume, Joey!
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Postby Dire Avenger » Mon Jul 26, 2004 2:57 pm

I like the massive look of the guy in black with the megablocks sheild. You have superbly blended in the Megabloks as well.

Hmm, im guessing you used baking soda and put a LEGO skull on top of it for the remains of the Man in Light Chain Mail Armor....

Oh yeah and your pictures are cleaned up superbly!

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