I like this story so much, that I think me and Sir Zepp will heavily endorse it on Castleland.com. Would you like that?
I'd love that, thanks!
Seikfreid
I like this story so much, that I think me and Sir Zepp will heavily endorse it on Castleland.com. Would you like that?
I could never come close to that. I love how your paragraphs are long and detailed.Seikfreid wrote:Algair saw this and screamed for the archers to bring down the thing, but the arrows did little to stop it. Algair fought furiously on his way to help, but he was not going to make it. Gromund was entangled with five undead. The troll raised its club to strike down Domrund. Without thinking, Seikfreid charged across the wall and leaped into the air, sword up. He gave a terrible yell and plunged the blade into the massive thing's back. It bellowed in agony and soldiers tried to cover their ears at the sound. It thrashed violently and smashed its back into the wall, trying to throw Seikfreid. But the boy hung on grimly. At last, the huge thing gave a gasp and collapsed in a heap to the ground.
Thanks again! I try to check up on the discussion from time to time, but I hadn't seen that yet. I love the name! And you bet I'll participate in the next story!Oh, by the way, I think you are doin' great over on the Castleland story. In case you don't read the discussion thread, we had sorta arrived on the name "The Jarithian War." We like being democratic, so do you like the title? We are going to do the next story on a Sameri(Yes, that's how I spell it) Empire invasion. Will you be participating? I hope ya can.
I actually got it from the original Harry Potter Quidditch Practice Set, 4726.What set did you get Seikfreid's cape from? I don't think I've seen it before.
First, I'm really, really sorry for not posting in so long, but I have been extra busy recently and I have had little free time. Thanks for being patient! Well, Seikfreid is based loosely off a combination of Aragorn (who has always been my favorite character from any story) and Shea from the Sword of Shannara. So it is pretty understandable why he seems similar. Just wait awhile in the story and it will differ from the Return of the King immensely.Napoleon wrote:Okay, one thing: this sounds very much like Return of the King. Seikfreid life sounds a lot like Aragorn. But other than that, I am loving the story! I also like the MOCs and I am looking forward to seeing more. Perhaps you should try making a website like me and Sir Zeppelin did. Webs.com is easy and totally free. The Castleland Group Stories site was made with it, as were my two sites in my sig. Anyway, keep up the really good work.
Don't worry, I understand if you're busy. I agree, Aragorn is one the best literary characters ever. He and Samwise Gamgee are my two favorite characters from LotR. I've never read or heard of The Sword of Shannara, is it good? This is just a guess, but is it Celtic?Seikfreid wrote: First, I'm really, really sorry for not posting in so long, but I have been extra busy recently and I have had little free time. Thanks for being patient! Well, Seikfreid is based loosely off a combination of Aragorn (who has always been my favorite character from any story) and Shea from the Sword of Shannara. So it is pretty understandable why he seems similar. Just wait awhile in the story and it will differ from the Return of the King immensely.
Ok, thanks for the advice! I think I may try that. Thanks a lot Napoleon!
It's a pretty good series, my favorite is The Sword of Shannara, which is the first one in the series, though not the first chronologically. I seriously have no idea of its origin, but it may well be Celtic.Napoleon wrote: I've never read or heard of The Sword of Shannara, is it good? This is just a guess, but is it Celtic?
Sounds great, I'll go ahead and join over there!Oh, we're moving the Castleland Group Stories over to Teenlegofans.com. Would you be willing to join? I wouldn't like to move it if you couldn't join. We think we could get more site members if we moved it there, and we could probably get more writers. I am pretty sure at least a couple of our members on TLF.com would contribute. Anyway, sorry I got a little off topic there, we just didn't want to move it without telling you.