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The Kingdom of Yub-Yubia Updated!

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Some of you have seen my "Kingdom of Yub-Yubia Stories". If not you can find it here

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The Armies of Yub-Yubia are back! And now the stories are told using Macromedia Flash! Want to get the first teaser to the story? Then click Here!
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Boy, do I work fast when I am on a roll, Here is Part 2 of chapter 1.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/mattc ... part-2.swf

Thanks! :)
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Not bad. It moves a bit too quickly for my taste though. And though using flash is a neat gimic, I think I'd prefer plain HTML to it. But that's just me.

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http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/mattc ... part-3.swf

is now up! :D

This is a rather dull chapter though...
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I agree. It moves too quickly. And i think this is better because it is not too Gondor in the Lord of the rings. Although you did keep the word "Minas" in Minas Yub Yub
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