Chapter #1 in Fraun's World (edited)

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Chapter #1 in Fraun's World (edited)

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I finished taking pics and writing the first chapter in Fraun's World.


It's now in .jpg form.

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Let me know what you think
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Your pictures and storytelling skills have improved a gret deal from the prologue. I look forward to seeing the next installment......

Dordrot gets armour, Frayla gets a sword, the newbies get demolished! :twisted:

er...

Or whatever happens. :D
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Formendacil wrote:Your pictures and storytelling skills have improved a gret deal from the prologue. I look forward to seeing the next installment......

Dordrot gets armour, Frayla gets a sword, the newbies get demolished! :twisted:

er...

Or whatever happens. :D

Hehe. Actually the next chapter is.: To Grandmother's house we go.

I goign ther now, so I thought I would make a story of my minifigs going to Grandmas. Lets hope that everyhting goes well on the set.


Edit: Hmm....the last few pics of the chapter seem to look like the were painted with watercolor. Oh well. :?
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Post by Lord_Of_The_LEGO »

Hey, that's a nice start!

Fraun seems to be much different than my Lone Falcon, since he knows he is a LEGO minifig and such, unlike the Lone Falcon who can't figure out what the heck is going on!! :lol:

I hope to see more!
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Lord_Of_The_LEGO wrote:Hey, that's a nice start!

Fraun seems to be much different than my Lone Falcon, since he knows he is a LEGO minifig and such, unlike the Lone Falcon who can't figure out what the heck is going on!! :lol:

I hope to see more!

Yea, Fraun knows who he is, but he is still a bit unknowing of things. I doesn't know about other toys or anything. He just knows that humans are basically your friends and not Ogres. :wink:

Thanks for the kind comments. :D
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Post by De_EmU »

Hehehe

It's pretty entertaining, nice job! I hope the shadow knights slaughter the the KK2 Panzy Team. JK
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The story continues like this: LOL, the Shadow Knights and Vladek spend all of their money at buying KK2:2 sets to pump up their evil army, attack Fraun and his buddies and after a heroic battle Fraun wins. :D
Just kiddin'. I like the start of your story, hopefully it gets keepin' on better.

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Post by Robin Hood »

Hey, pretty cool. The pics are way better than the prologue and the story sounds good. Keep it up.

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Post by TheOrk »

This looks like it has potential keep up the good work.
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