Excerpt from Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 9

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Excerpt from Ikros: Chaos Skies - Chapter 9

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Getting closer to finishing, no pictures yet, but here's a little taste of what's to come:
"This is just unfair!" Drakon burst in, growling, stomping his way into the middle of the room. He began to pace back and forth between the fireplace and the door, muttering to himself.

"Unfair, Sir Knight?" Alyia asked puzzled.

"It's a mistake! I'm the Grand Templar of the Triark Dragoons, after all! I deserve better!"

"...Better?" Garadaine looked at his mother with a raised eyebrow.

"Calm down, Drakon," Kullvox chuckled, entering the room slowly, handing over the enchanted sword to the Prince. Masark was close behind, trying to contain his own amusement.

"Calm down? Bah!" Drakon growled.

"What on earth is the matter?" Alyia stood up.

"Well..." Kullvox began.

"THREE!" Drakon interrupted indignantly, "He had three!"

"Three what?" Garadaine pleaded.
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Three what? You can't just leave us hanging there! Can't wait for the rest of the chapter!
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Post by Robin Hood »

No, no mustn't read it, must wait for whole chapterrrrr......aguagughgt!

Ok I read it. Now I feel worse than before. Three WHAT! AAA the suspence is killing me. I can't wait.

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dude... thats just evil. ;-)

Can't wait to see the next chapter ~
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Post by Sir Dillon »

Since I have just finished the first Ikros epic, It's not as much suspense. But still, it makes me want to know what the "three" is.
*goes to Chaos Skies to start reading*
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Post by The Hordesman »

How many around here has read the whole first and what is published if Chaos Skies? I feel like a one-man minority here.

I agree with Garadaine. Three what? Also, Ive never seen Drakon in a such mood, interesting. :D
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AWWW why do you do this to us, and me and the WOHLE WORLD.

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Ok, I just read the all that has been put online. Oh boy, now I want two know what the "three" whatever is more :o
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Post by DarkDotDotDotMan »

The Hordesman, better make that a 2 man minority.
I often skim through the entire 1st "book" and whatever have been published of Chaos Skies...
Sigh... Now I feel like a super nerd...
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Hmm... So does Drakon help the "gang" in thier quest?
My side of the continuation...
"THREE CHICKEN WINGS WITH BARBEQUE SAUCE!" Drakon bellowed.

"Three... Wings... Of... Chicken..." Garadaine replied.

"With barbeque sauce! Don't forget the barbeque sauce! Never Forget the barbeque sauce!" Drakon interrupted and said.

"... With barbeque sauce... was the cause of your anguish and delay?!?!" Exclaimed Garadine.

Kullvox crossed his arms and said, "And don't forget the people injured to vent Drakon's anger..."
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DarkDotDotDotMan wrote:The Hordesman, better make

Hmm... So does Drakon help the "gang" in thier quest?
My side of the continuation...
"THREE CHICKEN WINGS WITH BARBEQUE SAUCE!" Drakon bellowed.

"Three... Wings... Of... Chicken..." Garadaine replied.

"With barbeque sauce! Don't forget the barbeque sauce! Never Forget the barbeque sauce!" Drakon interrupted and said.

"... With barbeque sauce... was the cause of your anguish and delay?!?!" Exclaimed Garadine.

Kullvox crossed his arms and said, "And don't forget the people injured to vent Drakon's anger..."
Haha thats bloody brilliant:P

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DarkDotDotDotMan wrote: "THREE CHICKEN WINGS WITH BARBEQUE SAUCE!" Drakon bellowed.

"Three... Wings... Of... Chicken..." Garadaine replied.

"With barbeque sauce! Don't forget the barbeque sauce! Never Forget the barbeque sauce!" Drakon interrupted and said.

"... With barbeque sauce... was the cause of your anguish and delay?!?!" Exclaimed Garadine.

Kullvox crossed his arms and said, "And don't forget the people injured to vent Drakon's anger..."
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Hmm... So does Drakon help the "gang" in thier quest?
My side of the continuation...
"THREE CHICKEN WINGS WITH BARBEQUE SAUCE!" Drakon bellowed.

"Three... Wings... Of... Chicken..." Garadaine replied.

"With barbeque sauce! Don't forget the barbeque sauce! Never Forget the barbeque sauce!" Drakon interrupted and said.

"... With barbeque sauce... was the cause of your anguish and delay?!?!" Exclaimed Garadine.

Kullvox crossed his arms and said, "And don't forget the people injured to vent Drakon's anger..."
LOL!!

Yep, that was priceless... I don't think I'd even mind if that was the true answer. LOL

Oh, and not to worry, I've perused both stories more than once in the wee hours of the mornin'... so you two are not alone. 8)
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Chapter 9

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Very suspensful! I can't wait for the rest! :D
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Ikros Update:

Chapter 9 is written and edited. Photography starts tonight! (or at least I clean my room in preparation ;))

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Post by DarkDotDotDotMan »

... Only one thing to say. YAHOO! Man, I really been waiting for a good read lately...
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