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Postby venvorskar » Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:54 pm

Please add my story. I started working on it.
http://www.wizardbricks.com/story.html
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Postby TheOrk » Thu Sep 29, 2005 12:25 am

venvorskar wrote:Please add my story. I started working on it.
http://www.wizardbricks.com/story.html


Consider it done :wink:

It looks good so far, but could use some heavy editing. As some one like Anthony Sava can tell you, you shouldn't rush anything like this.

The prologue and the chapters should be divided into there own webpages, I don't have a website or don't see getting one in the near future( :evil: ) but it just looks "cleaner" that way.

Besides that it looks pretty good, keep up the good work!
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Postby ottoatm » Thu Sep 29, 2005 2:17 am

Hey -

Good to see another story being born!

It looks pretty decent so far, although I would probally have to echo, on some level, what TheOrk said. I'm guessing your discovering how much of a pain editing can be. :wink: There are a lot of small little details and steps to consider, especially when mixing in real-life backgrounds, such as Ikros does.

This pic it great - http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Venvorskar/Story/mendock.jpg
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Postby venvorskar » Fri Sep 30, 2005 12:16 am

Okay, I've done a complete overhaul of the story section. Your old link won't work any more(if I did things right) so here's a new one:
http://www.wizardbricks.com/Story%20Home.html

I have a Contents page, from which you can view the chapters and prolouge; and the pictures are 100% edited.(With effects too!)
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Postby TheOrk » Fri Sep 30, 2005 1:58 am

venvorskar wrote:Okay, I've done a complete overhaul of the story section. Your old link won't work any more(if I did things right) so here's a new one:
http://www.wizardbricks.com/Story%20Home.html

I have a Contents page, from which you can view the chapters and prolouge; and the pictures are 100% edited.(With effects too!)


Yep, you did it right. I don't really know if you did that right because I've never done that before, but the link works and the other is broken. :wink:

Great job, on overhauling the story section. It looks alot better. It looks nice and clean with all the LEGO elements interacting with the real elements. I could use alittle more text though, in my opinion.

Overall you've done a great job on that. I can't wait to see where this thing goes! I also like that teleporting special effect :wink:
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Postby Graynar » Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:39 pm

This is great!

By Christmas there'll probally be another ten new story sites up. Wow, who started this sudden uprise in story sites any way?

venvorskar your site is looking a lot better now to. I also vote for a bit more text as well.

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Postby TheOrk » Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:08 pm

By Christmas there'll probally be another ten new story sites up. Wow, who started this sudden uprise in story sites any way?


Well, I may have since I started the list. When there is a big list, I'm sure it would get people to post their stories.

Alot of people seem to have some sort of story to go along with their castle minifigs. 8)
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Postby ottoatm » Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:53 pm

Graynar wrote: Wow, who started this sudden uprise in story sites any way?


Good question... I'm not sure what the answer is, actually... maybe there is just "something in the air". ;-)

Either way, I think we can all agree that it is a very nice thing indeed! I hope we can keep the LEGO storywriter's group strong!
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Postby TheOrk » Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:57 pm

Today I added the Kingdom of Kilrathy. I got that from the mirror thread on Castle world.

http://s13.invisionfree.com/Castle_Worl ... howforum=2

Thanks to Quill Master for updating that. Anybody got any information on this story?
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Postby Maedhros » Fri Oct 14, 2005 9:59 pm

It hasn´t started yet as far as I know... Shadow should be able to fill you in about details.
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Postby ottoatm » Sun Oct 16, 2005 5:03 am

Hey TheOrk -

Shadow said he's working on the story now, but finalizing the actually website at the moment (and looking for suggestions on the site itself)...

I'm not sure when a chapter or two might pop up, but I think he'll be keeping everyone informed...
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Postby Shadow » Mon Oct 31, 2005 10:51 pm

Whoa! I hadn't checked this out. I have updated my site a bit, yet am in the process of building my castle. I'm probably going to release a chapter in about late November. Then I'll probably give you a Xmas edition. Thanks for adding it on!
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Postby Cyclonis » Wed Dec 21, 2005 7:19 am

Hey Ork thanks for adding my story 'Tale of Venolia'. Its appreciated :)
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Postby TheOrk » Thu Dec 29, 2005 1:39 am

Although this is a little late...

Cyclonis wrote:Hey Ork thanks for adding my story 'Tale of Venolia'. Its appreciated :)


No problem, the more the merrier :)


I also just want to announce that Graynar now has SEVEN chapters in the second book of his story (Sikaron) when I last checked and as far as I heard on this site, the last time there was an update, it was for the end of book one.

Overall, I'd say those new seven chapters are really good. Keep up the great work. :)
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Postby Graynar » Fri Dec 30, 2005 1:36 am

Shadow wrote many years ago(I'm kidding):
I'm probably going to release a chapter in about late November


Nope. But you told me about working on your LEGO movie. :wink:

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I also just want to announce that Graynar now has SEVEN chapters in the second book of his story (Sikaron) when I last checked and as far as I heard on this site, the last time there was an update, it was for the end of book one.

Overall, I'd say those new seven chapters are really good. Keep up the great work.


Hey thanks for posting that. It's nice to know people visit my site every now and then. I haven't posted any updates here in a while, but I'm sure too when book 3 comes into play. :wink:
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