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Postby The Hordesman » Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:23 pm

Okay, this post has been a little messy but now its fixed.

Updated map:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/TheHo ... egomap.jpg

Story folder:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=128350

Remember that many of these are minor characters and some of the more important ones has not been added there yet. :wink:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=130137

It is not completely serious, since, well, its lego.
The story itself is what you can be used to (especially in its anime ways) when it comes to middleages/fantasy. Its a sort of mix between every castle theme you could say.
Warning: Very mild swearings!

1:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815
2:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=133055
3:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=134192
4:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=138651
5:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=139950
6:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1451345
7:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1622604
8:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=173760
9:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=175421
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Postby TheOrk » Wed Jun 08, 2005 12:39 am

Interesting, I'll add it to the big list! I(ME) think that you should switch the colours around on the map. The sea should be blue and Morcia bley :wink:
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Postby ottoatm » Wed Jun 08, 2005 12:51 am

Looks like you put a lot of thought into your characters... that, I think, is the first step towards a great story!

I'll be looking forward to more postings then - :D
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Postby The Hordesman » Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:13 pm

TheOrk wrote:Interesting, I'll add it to the big list! I(ME) think that you should switch the colours around on the map. The sea should be blue and Morcia bley :wink:


Actually, the blue color is "morcian blue", as seen on the castle flags and tower spires, etc. I thought the dark teal looked oceanic and not easily mistaken for land, but I may change the map later.

Actually, I may make the first chapter sooner, but then I will need some heavy image editing... :wink:
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Postby venvorskar » Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:53 am

Your map is very good. I like the MegaBloks land in the corner. Your characters are also good and I can't wait for the story! I intend to make one(a lego story) myself someday.....
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Postby The Hordesman » Tue Jun 14, 2005 6:14 pm

Good news! The first chapter is done and will be released as soon Ive fixed the pictures! :D

That is, today or tomorrow! Hurray!
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Postby eNiGMa » Tue Jun 14, 2005 7:51 pm

Nice. I can't wait to read it!
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Postby The Hordesman » Tue Jun 14, 2005 9:09 pm

When public:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815

Okay the chapter isnt complete yet, and the "to be continued" picture is pretty crappy, and yes, the pics may be updated later on, but atleast its well, the first chapter! :D
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Postby ottoatm » Tue Jun 14, 2005 11:29 pm

A new story!!! SWEEEET!!!! I'm gonna go read it right now! Thanks man - I love LEGO stories! :)
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Postby The Hordesman » Wed Jun 15, 2005 4:01 am

Reuploading since they werent in the right order. If brickshelf gets moderated next time tomorrow, you will also see some new stuff happening. :D
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Postby ottoatm » Wed Jun 15, 2005 4:36 am

yea, I noticed that... it threw me off for a second there - :P
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Postby DarkDotDotDotMan » Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:23 pm

Hmm... Good story. I absolutly love the little details you added, like how the armor bearer said his job was heavy but easy, and how the guy with the pike killed his own comrade and ... *Checks the story* ... Is that a neikked guy saying "Who want's some?" ?

... Love story! Please update!
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Postby The Hordesman » Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:35 pm

DarkDotDotDotMan wrote:Hmm... Good story. I absolutly love the little details you added, like how the armor bearer said his job was heavy but easy, and how the guy with the pike killed his own comrade and ... *Checks the story* ... Is that a neikked guy saying "Who want's some?" ?

... Love the story! Please update!


Well, if you check the shield you see that the cavalryman is one of the knight's men... Yes, that naked dude is pretty crazy indeed... I think he looked pretty grim(and scottish?), so i thought it would be fun making him say that, not to be misunderstood! :lol:

Nice that you like it :) Next chapter will be released within some days perhaps...
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Postby Sir Drake » Wed Jun 15, 2005 6:52 pm

It's a good story, the only minus I saw, was that some men had Space pants and armor. I love the humor in that story. Keep it up! :wink:
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Postby eNiGMa » Wed Jun 15, 2005 9:48 pm

I just read through it, and I commend you. Good use of comic relief during the battle; some of those things sound like something I would say! Nice work, and I can't wait for the next update.
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