Sorry for double post, but two chapters are out:
8 and 9!
Found on the usual place:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=128350
Sorry if the Frightman joke was too silly, couldnt help it...
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- The Hordesman
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Hey, not bad. The one thing that annoys me is that you don't use bubbles for your wording, and oftentimes it's hard to read.
Good work!
Good work!
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I've been reading this for a long time. I like it, but I agree with EofAlshire, you should maybe use speech bubbles, it is kind of hard to read. You are a good author.
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Aye. It shall be soon from this onwards.smcginnis wrote:but I agree with EofAlshire, you should maybe use speech bubbles, it is kind of hard to read.
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