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Postby TheOrk » Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:25 am

Great story mate! This is starting to look like real competition for the Kingdom of Ikros. I already added it to the "Ultimate Stories List" thread, but does it have a name besides The Hordsman's Story?

Great stuff keep up the good work :D
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Postby The Hordesman » Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:12 am

Thanks for all comments!

Yes, Im in bad need of a name to this story. I may just soon make a new thread about possible names.

Im not sure it can compete with Ikros. It was never supposed to be awesome like Ikros but just something fun, Its not my best story but I hope people will enjoy it to the later chapters. :wink:

Im very aware of the space torsos- and use them of a reason.
Alien armor of Blackchainer captain- I thought the armor looked like a cool scrappy armor with a chaos-like medallion.
red robo armor and legs: I like this armor, it looks pretty heavy and not so spaceish, the legs goes well as heavy armor too.
M:tron torso- there is a good reason why I use it, and why the Shadowkranians use it. The "M" is the symbol for the astrological Scorpion sign (though with demon tail), and I didnt want to sticker that torso, I like it for some reason. :P
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Postby The Hordesman » Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:10 pm

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=133055

Hoho! Chapter 2 is out! I will not post every pic here, this time you should be patient and wait until its moderated. :P

While I made it I also answered a question about the fig that gets killed by the "Chain of Warp" spell in the last chapter. There are less violence, swearing and perhaps less humour in this one but it answers strange things in the first one just as it adds more questions!
Enjoy!
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Postby Sir Drake » Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:36 pm

Heh, great story. The green critter reminds me of Yoda in the Empire Strikes Back when he's talking to Luke and searching all Luke's lugage.
I like the funny stuff in the comic.
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Postby DarkDotDotDotMan » Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:03 pm

True, it was less violent, fewer accounts of swearing and less humour in the chapter, but You still got the little details going on. Good! ... Now that I think about it... If the Old man and Chris kill the group, wouldn't Damarus get blamed for the death of the leader type dude?
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Postby eNiGMa » Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:35 pm

Good chapter! I really like the throne room. It looks pleasantly evil. :twisted:
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Postby The Hordesman » Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:59 am

Chapter 3 will be out soon and I want to know what you all think, so I can improve things for later chapters.

The story is complete for chapter 3-5, but I can add more things if you all want to, such as things that you are uncertain of, and things that makes you all miffed.

Indeed, things will not remain as they used to be! :wink:
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Postby DarkDotDotDotMan » Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:45 pm

OooOo... Soon... About adding things... Can you add bandits, some kind of mythical sword and more people in the quest? Or did you do that already?
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Postby Sir Kohran » Wed Jun 22, 2005 7:29 pm

Man, I'm loving this story! :D The battles look suitably chaotic and mad, and the figs look wacky enough. The story is also very funny, kinda like a Monty Python movie. Looking forward to more! :lol:
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Postby ottoatm » Thu Jun 23, 2005 1:51 am

I agree with Sir Kohran - this has been a fun read - lookin' forward to chpt. 3! :D
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Postby The Hordesman » Sat Jun 25, 2005 7:26 am

The story now has a name:

The Sorceror's Return

I have reuploaded some title screens for the two chapters. Chapter 3 will be out today If the camera will work right. :)

Yes, it will feature the Outpost of Keirrod. Unfortunatly I have only gained one reply on that thread so I know it isnt something to be proud of :cry: ...
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Postby The Hordesman » Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:05 pm

I have completed chapter3. it will be moderated soon enough.

Entire folder:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=134192

BUT! If you want suprises, watch from page 1... http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1275096

This chapter introduces a number new characters, yes, the anime feel is beginning to grow from here on... Its a little more serious than the others, and the humour here is a little more "anime inspired" than before. however, the old style will go back and forth as I want. :P
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Postby TheOrk » Sat Jun 25, 2005 11:44 pm

Great job as always Hordesman! If this keeps up this really will be one of the best. I can't wait for the next chapter! 8)
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Postby The Hordesman » Sun Jun 26, 2005 5:11 pm

The chapter should have been updated by now. I still want to hear what you all have to say, critisism etc.
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Postby Sir Drake » Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:28 pm

Great story! It's less funny, but it's still funny enough to keep me reading (almost everything is funny to me, I love to laugh). I like Ankra's eyes in the pink/flower scene, very manga-ish. Keep it up! :D
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