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Postby DarkDotDotDotMan » Sun Jun 26, 2005 7:30 pm

That pale lady was really ugly...
But... it's a interesting story and addition to the story so far.

Hmm... I don't see the new additions to the chapters...
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Postby The Hordesman » Sun Jun 26, 2005 8:50 pm

DarkDotDotDotMan wrote:That pale lady was really ugly...
But... it's a interesting story and addition to the story so far.

Hmm... I don't see the new additions to the chapters...


Yes, I thought she wasnt that a looker either... It has its reasons... Now.
What did I mean with that? You'll see. :wink:

The "new addition" is just the title screens.

Thanks for more replies. :)
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Postby The Hordesman » Fri Jul 29, 2005 8:53 pm

Chapter 4 out. Thread renamed!

First page for spoil-haters like myself:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1321468

Folder when public:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=138651

*MILD SPOIL*

For the first time I "borrow" a joke, or more of a scene, from somewere else.
The scene with the monkey salesman was a must, I sat and made my arabian traders and ended up with that fellow, his resemblance with the monkey salesman in Marocko was... Wierd. I just had to make that scene! :D

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Postby TheOrk » Mon Aug 01, 2005 1:56 pm

Good job on chapter 4 Hordesman! I can't wait for the next chapter now. It did have alot of talking but that was just the build up for chapter 5. Keep up the good work.
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Postby ottoatm » Mon Aug 01, 2005 2:14 pm

This was a great new chapter - I was glad to see you had managed to publish a new one. This one is a bit different from the previous chapters in that there is a bit more dialogue and development, but that's never a bad thing, and it looks like your building up to another big battle... cool!

PS - I actually have never seen the scene you re-created in LEGO, but it was cool to see the town scenes - your doing a lot of cool customization.
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Postby Sir Drake » Thu Aug 04, 2005 9:41 am

Great, looks like it getting fun! Nice army, too!
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Postby The Hordesman » Sat Aug 06, 2005 10:33 pm

Haha, I doubt that anyone knows of the game... Even less of the scene since usually players shoot the guard distracted by the salesman. :roll:

Update again! CHAPTER 5!
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1332118

Seriously, things in this story is getting wierder... I hope I'll get to introduce more female characters... Before all these males takes over the show (Akra only turns human when she has rested enough and its really necessary) I dunno but I find them more interesting than male characters, and they do not need to run around in toit clothes to be more interesting... Personalities are enough for me. 8)

Sorry, no glimpse of the main badguy yet...

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Postby Dragonlord Esq. » Fri Aug 12, 2005 9:57 am

I really enjoyed the "bouncing death" frame. That made me chuckle, I have to admit.

One thing though- It doesn't make a lot of sense to set up your siege weapons in range of enemy crossbows.
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Postby ottoatm » Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:50 pm

Dragonlord Esq. wrote:One thing though- It doesn't make a lot of sense to set up your siege weapons in range of enemy crossbows.


That's true - I actually didn't think about that. But I did like your latest chapter - it's always nice to see a good ol fashioned siege. I didn't really understand everything that happened with Shadowborn... is there some demon or devil living inside of him that he doesn't know about?
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Postby The Hordesman » Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:06 pm

Ah, finally! :D

Yes true, I didnt think of that either, but the catapults had some difficulty aiming when they were out of reach. Actually, hiring mercenaries to attack an outpost without defence doesnt make any sense either, but reasons will be explained in the next chapter.

Other things will be explained later on. :wink:
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Postby Dragonlord Esq. » Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:28 pm

The Hordesman wrote:Ah, finally! :D


I assume you're talking about the time it took to get a response. Don't get discouraged with that. You have to remember that most people are here to talk about LEGO sets and MOC's, not fiction. So far I've only read your last chapter, but it was entertaining, so I'll be sure to read the rest. Keep up the good work.
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Postby The Hordesman » Sun Dec 04, 2005 12:29 pm

Seems to have forgotten to post ol' chapter 6 but here it is:

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1451345

Behold the viking madness!
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Postby TheOrk » Sat Feb 11, 2006 2:58 pm

The Hordesman wrote:Chapter 7 is out! :D

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1622604


Excellent job Hordesman! I can count on that story to always deliver.

BTW Where did you get the glasses for that german wizard? 8)
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Postby The Hordesman » Sat Feb 11, 2006 3:15 pm

TheOrk wrote:BTW Where did you get the glasses for that german wizard? 8)


They very first on a very old kinderegg toy which now is lost, I found them in a box one day and thought they fit perfect on a minifig, and after some WoW I thought they would work good on a wizard. :wink:
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