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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:45 pm
by The Hordesman
Sorry for double post, but two chapters are out:

8 and 9!

Found on the usual place:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=128350

Sorry if the Frightman joke was too silly, couldnt help it...

PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 3:33 am
by E of Alshire
Hey, not bad. The one thing that annoys me is that you don't use bubbles for your wording, and oftentimes it's hard to read.

Good work!

PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 5:58 pm
by smcginnis
I've been reading this for a long time. I like it, but I agree with EofAlshire, you should maybe use speech bubbles, it is kind of hard to read. You are a good author.

~smcginnis

PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 8:09 pm
by The Hordesman
smcginnis wrote:but I agree with EofAlshire, you should maybe use speech bubbles, it is kind of hard to read.


Aye. It shall be soon from this onwards. :wink: