The Ancient Tomes of Chiron

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Rosh.Gonff
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Post by Rosh.Gonff »

Well thats the coolest lego story out there (even better then Ikros in my opinion :wink: )
so if whatever change you are making to it takes down its coolness level then thats not so good. It's indepth writing is what makes it enjoyable (though) more then the pictures but too few pics also can make it become not so cool
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Shucks... right when I was all set with a good excuse to take shortcuts someone goes and gives my story a compliment like that. :) I've decided to do a few less pics, but maybe no one will notice...
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Post by ottoatm »

I finally got around to adding chapter 5 of my second book in the Ancient Tomes of Chiron... although I may add one picture in the beginning of the chapter.

I had the entire second book written with pics taken and edited when it was all lost, so it's been tough to get into the mood to do it again, which is why it's taken so long to do.

However, I seem to "have the bug" to want to write again, and that can only mean more stuff to come. Because I am in Taiwan and my LEGO is in NY, it may be awhile before the next few chapters are posted and done, but by December's end, I hope to have the entire 3 books finished and online... I hope... :D
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Post by smcginnis »

Great new chapter, ottoatm! I've been waiting for it forever. I like how much action there is, you're very good at writing battles. I do think you should add another picture at the beginning.

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P.S. If I haven't said so before, I love you're story! Thanks for writing it!
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