Your opinion so far...
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 9:52 pm
Hey all. For those who have read some or all of my story (legelot.50webs.com/mystory), I was wondering what your thoughts were so far?
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I agree with this complaint completely. The reason I made the figs all the same is for several reasons:But like theork said, the figs all look alike, maybe some hats or hair would make them look better.
Why yes you did.Wow...did I just write all that?
Half of it before I fell asleep.Did anyone manage to read all that? :
The first of the three books is a bit slow compaired to the other two, and I did think several times of "spicing it up", so to speak. But I think this is not such a bad sign... for example, the FOTR was slow compaired to the other two as well... so I decided to pretend I could compare my story to Tolkiens.Shadow wrote:Although it is extremely well written t seems to be a little void of action and needs a more variety.
Ha ha... yes, most readers were not to happy reading with them... and I must confess that working with them was not enjoyable either... I've written another story without the clones, but have to edit the pics before I can publish it... this is the Scroll of Ragnok link that you see on my Legelot site.Shadow wrote: The biggest con would be the clone figs
Ah... I'm glad you like! Actually, I can't take total credit for that... credit must in fact go to... LEGO! (http://www.classic-castle.com/sets/imag ... 4/6040.jpg)It's hard to tell from this pic, but the Blacksmith actually has the cape as an apron for protection against the sparks or whatever... I just took the idea and expanded it to indicate the slave profession and what not.Shadow wrote: Actually, your use of the cape for an apron was a genius idea and I have used it once or twice since then.
Book two is actually all writen and the pics all taken! I am almost done editing the pics for chapter one, so it should be published soon. I was going to publish sooner, but the Castle World forum has been so fun, I got a little distracted. (who knew forums were so much work!?!)Shadow wrote: When are you going to make a sequel?
That is cool! I'm glad you like it - it was fun to make - also, good of you to revive this post - I'm glad to see people are still enjoying the story ~Shadow wrote: I like your story and have read all of it so far.
I like your story because of the clone figs. It makes them more evil and, um, evil. Grate Work!ottoatm wrote:Ha ha... yes, most readers were not to happy reading with them... and I must confess that working with them was not enjoyable either... I've written another story without the clones, but have to edit the pics before I can publish it... this is the Scroll of Ragnok link that you see on my Legelot site.Shadow wrote: The biggest con would be the clone figs
Ah - that was actually the reason I put them in the story, something of an "us" (good) vs. "them" (evil) thing... good to see you got it (and liked it!)E of Alshire wrote:I like your story because of the clone figs. It makes them more evil and, um, evil. Grate Work!