Three new chapters on my website!

by **Graynar** » Sun Sep 18, 2005 10:26 pm

Hey guys!

I don't know if anyone is exited but I sure am!

Three new chapters on my website just now.
http://www.geocities.com/dead2eat/thest ... tml?200518

Comments and criticism are welcome!

Graynar

by **ottoatm** » Mon Sep 19, 2005 12:22 am

WOW!

Three chapters at once! You are not slow, thats for sure... cool!!

I'll be sure to check it out - good to see more people writing stories!

by **TheOrk** » Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:46 am

Awsome job Graynar! My favorite part of the three new chapters was the seige of Shardon. Battles are fun with lots of pictures :wink:

Keep up the great work!

by **Shadow** » Wed Sep 21, 2005 8:19 pm

Wow! Looks good! I will catch up on the whole story after I finish Ikros. You asked for criticism and I shall only give a slight suggestion. Make you type just a bit smaller. It looks like you have it at something like 18pt, try downsizing it to about 13-14pt, that way you have type that is not taking away from the glory of the pictures. Good luck!!!

by **Graynar** » Wed Sep 21, 2005 10:02 pm

Thanks for the comments guys!

I made the font smaller, took a while, but it is smaller.

Please tell me if you like the smaller font better,

Graynar

by **Shadow** » Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:21 am

That looks much better! I finished Ikros and I'm now onto yours!

by **Tanotrooper** » Thu Sep 22, 2005 9:45 am

great job!!! love the undead army and now i see where your avatars from

Three new chapters on my website!

Three new chapters on my website!

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