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My first Lego story can be viewed at the link below:
http://www.wizardbricks.com/Story%20Home.html

-WARNING! The contents of this story may contain un-color-schemed MOCs!

This story has been rated PG-13 for:
Violence, Intence Action Sequences, Sci-Fi Creature Action, and Extreme Peril.

P.S. Something is wrong with the poll. There was supposed to be Bad rating. Feel free to use it.(Just say so in your post)

venvorskar wrote:P.S. Something is wrong with the poll. There was supposed to be Bad rating. Feel free to use it.(Just say so in your post)

Fixed.

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It's a bit early to say for sure, but what you got is not too bad - good job with the photoshop for the ocean... you might consider some white foam around the pillars to show where the waves hit - but thats just a personal choice.

This almost reminds me a bit of Harry Potter, with the modern world and the medieval world, and people jumping in between (that's a good thing, for me ).

It's good to see you've seperated them into chapters, makes it cleaner, as TheOrk suggested.

I am very impressed with your photo shop work on the waves as well.

But please do not rush your story. I have learned not to do that the hard way.

Graynar