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The Tower of Ancyron

PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 12:23 am
by venvorskar
My first Lego story can be viewed at the link below:
http://www.wizardbricks.com/Story%20Home.html

-WARNING! The contents of this story may contain un-color-schemed MOCs!

This story has been rated PG-13 for:
Violence, Intence Action Sequences, Sci-Fi Creature Action, and Extreme Peril.

P.S. Something is wrong with the poll. There was supposed to be Bad rating. Feel free to use it.(Just say so in your post)

Re: The Tower of Ancyron

PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 2:55 am
by Formendacil
venvorskar wrote:P.S. Something is wrong with the poll. There was supposed to be Bad rating. Feel free to use it.(Just say so in your post)


Fixed.

~Michael A. Joosten - Moderator~

PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:09 am
by ottoatm
It's a bit early to say for sure, but what you got is not too bad - good job with the photoshop for the ocean... you might consider some white foam around the pillars to show where the waves hit - but thats just a personal choice. ;-)

This almost reminds me a bit of Harry Potter, with the modern world and the medieval world, and people jumping in between (that's a good thing, for me ;-)).

It's good to see you've seperated them into chapters, makes it cleaner, as TheOrk suggested.

PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:35 pm
by Graynar
I am very impressed with your photo shop work on the waves as well.

But please do not rush your story. I have learned not to do that the hard way.

Graynar