Well that's odd. I must have cut and pasted the wrong text into the picture. Its fixed now, but it may take some time before brickshelf catches up to the change. Now you all know why I post these early, so I have lots of proof readers before the its entered in the contest.
Whew! Finally the story is complete. All I have to do now is go back and fix some typos and other similar errors. I'd appreciate it if you would point out any you have seen, either by replying here or by PM. Here you go:
Very, very nice ending Athos. I liked this story very much. The only typos I noticed (but there might be more) are in frame 50. 'Messanger' is really spelled Messenger.
~smcginnis
Learning French.
Say it "ESS-MICK-GIN-ISS", with a hard "G", as in "get".
Good read, Athos. The mystery in the beginning really draws you in. You have a sympathetic protagonist and the pace is good. It was an easy read and had plenty of action to spice it up. Nice Job.
Finally the story is complete. All I have to do now is go back and fix some typos and other similar errors. I'd appreciate it if you would point out any you have seen, either by replying here or by PM. Here you go:
