This chapter was going to be bigger, but I cut it in half so I could present it to you and get some work done on my entry for the Storytelling Contest. Special thanks go to Fry_slayer for pointing me to better word bubbles.
Jellybean--Chapter 3: Junk Mail
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Jellybean--Chapter 3: Junk Mail
Today we meet Frank the Mailman. Enjoy!
This chapter was going to be bigger, but I cut it in half so I could present it to you and get some work done on my entry for the Storytelling Contest. Special thanks go to Fry_slayer for pointing me to better word bubbles.
This chapter was going to be bigger, but I cut it in half so I could present it to you and get some work done on my entry for the Storytelling Contest. Special thanks go to Fry_slayer for pointing me to better word bubbles.
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Guy in Vla mask....
Did I smell a plot?
Keep up the good work
Did I smell a plot?
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Ha ha... that was quite funny... I believe it's something like "American Association of Retired People"... or something like that... Enigma seems to be poking fun at Danju's ageDanju the Clever wrote:AARP? What is AARP?
... classic, but I have to admit the part with the sword... ha ha... I guess that's a dead horse I will just never get tired of kicking, but I always laugh when I see someone make this joke.Good job... seems to be leading up to something big.
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n. pl. Knights Templars or Knights Templar
1.A member of an order of knights founded about 1118 to protect pilgrims in the Holy Land during the Second Crusade.
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n. pl. Knights Templars or Knights Templar
1.A member of an order of knights founded about 1118 to protect pilgrims in the Holy Land during the Second Crusade.
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Great chapter, eNiGMa. I love that horse joke, and the part about 'come to Ankoria' is really funny. I agree, these speech bubbles are much better. The only thing I would fix would be in frame a4, since Danju is speaking first, make his bubble above Frank's. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I'm a Pumpkin.
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Say it "ESS-MICK-GIN-ISS", with a hard "G", as in "get".
I'm a Pumpkin.
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Thank you all for your comments! Chapter four won't be out for a little while yet, so I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
And we will meet Frank again....
And we will meet Frank again....
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Great chapter! I love it! I like the whole idea!
Great work, keep it up!
hope to see chapter 4 out fairly soon...
Great work, keep it up!
hope to see chapter 4 out fairly soon...
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Do I sense some competition with Fry's series?
Anyway good job Nathan! I like it a lot.
Anyway good job Nathan! I like it a lot.
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Nah, me and Fry are cool.ragnarok wrote:Do I sense some competition with Fry's series?
Anyway, chapter four might be out sooner than I planned. I haven't started on it yet, but I might in the next week or so.
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