[Week10] Critical Element

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[Week10] Critical Element

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Babelessland? Duh....

Author note: Just passed through an energy consuming personal ordeal, now I am free
of it but seriously lacking behind schedule for the story telling contest... oh well...

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Post by Sir Kohran »

Good work...I love how Jayko starts daydreaming ( :shock: ) at the sight of the ladies. I catch myself at that now and again...

Nice to see Falco and Jayko finding some common ground for a change.

Is the white goblet that Jayko is holding an official or painted piece?

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Post by TheBohrok »

Haha, that's great! It's so true; many of the castle themes are lacking in female figures. Good job on another comic!
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This is great again, Fry. Finally, a problem that isn't exclusive to Morcia.

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Edit: Kohran, it is an official piece, although Fry's might be custom.
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Post by Mike Viper »

That's a good one. I love how falco just realizes what jayko is staring at, and seems himself to regret it. Heh heh. Good one.
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Post by dJOLe_sk8 »

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Hehe, no women in Morcia at all... poor Jellybeans...
... and that's why there will be no more of them... :wink: :lol:

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Post by Mike Viper »

You should have an episode on Morcia's lack of various plant-life compared to the classics lush planlife...just a thought.
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Post by dJOLe_sk8 »

As for the idea, you could point on the lack of vegetation in Jayko's world...
There is a serious thret for all of them to suffocate without plants to produce an oxygen (by the way, minfigs needs oxygen to breath :wink: )...

Just suggesting, I'm really sad for plants
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Post by Remyth »

hey,

Great job, Fry_slayer! I really like how you found a lack that both Falco and Jayko share. I also really like the way that he drifts off.

Question: I was wondering if "what did you said right now?" was a mistake that was accidently overlooked, or was it on purpose?

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Post by Traveler »

Hehe, so true. Our knights need maidens to rescue, or what's the point of going on quests and defending the realm?
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Post by Fry_slayer »

Woh yeah, thanks guys ... we can always use more babes in both LEGOLAND and real life.
Is the white goblet that Jayko is holding an official or painted piece?
It is official... dont ask me where it come from though, my mind is quite blank for the moment.
Question: I was wondering if "what did you said right now?" was a mistake that was accidently overlooked, or was it on purpose?
Sorry I dont quite get the question, if u are saying about the grammar part it is my fault to be blame (the phrase need to change later anyway, some one has already PMed me), if it is the story well Jakyo pratically was not there from frame 2 to 3.
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Post by ottoatm »

Ha ha ha... when I saw "critical element" I thought it was something along the lines of a small building piece or fig accesory... you really suprised me with the female figs, but it was hilarious! :) I actually like the grammar error at the end... adds to Jayko's shock.
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Fry_slayer wrote:
Question: I was wondering if "what did you said right now?" was a mistake that was accidently overlooked, or was it on purpose?
Sorry I dont quite get the question, if u are saying about the grammar part it is my fault to be blame (the phrase need to change later anyway, some one has already PMed me), if it is the story well Jakyo pratically was not there from frame 2 to 3.
I meant the grammer. Just pointing it out. Sorry for not explaining very well :oops: . Anyway, it sounds good, since Jayko is in a daze and such.

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Funny, at first I thought he was talking about the goblet. :oops:
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Very funny, as usual. How do you come up with these? :D Can't wait for next week.

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