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Fear: The Catalyst. <- my contest story

Postby Shurtugal » Thu Sep 28, 2006 8:03 pm

The story I entered into the contest.


Fear: The Catalyst



There might be a few things wrong with the site, I'm still a little unclear...
Thanks to Lamanda for pretty much guiding me through the process, though. :oops:

Yes, it is a Megabloks tree trunk that makes them crash...
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Postby kelderic » Thu Sep 28, 2006 10:15 pm

This is good. The way you did the website, with the book graphic, is also very cool.

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Postby Shurtugal » Wed Oct 04, 2006 5:55 pm

Has anyone else read it?

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Postby Maedhros » Thu Oct 05, 2006 4:34 pm

Just read it, and it was very good! Felt quite long though, was it really less than 20 pages with double spacing? Or maybe I´m just tired :P

You described the environments very well, and the way you built up the suspense was really nice.

Not too spectacular when it came to MOCs though, but on the other hand there wasn´t really much to build for this story as it took place out in the forest ;)

Good work anyways!
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Postby Shurtugal » Thu Oct 05, 2006 6:52 pm

Thanks!
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