The story I entered into the contest.
Fear: The Catalyst
There might be a few things wrong with the site, I'm still a little unclear...
Thanks to Lamanda for pretty much guiding me through the process, though.
Yes, it is a Megabloks tree trunk that makes them crash...
Fear: The Catalyst. <- my contest story
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Fear: The Catalyst. <- my contest story
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This is good. The way you did the website, with the book graphic, is also very cool.
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Has anyone else read it?
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Just read it, and it was very good! Felt quite long though, was it really less than 20 pages with double spacing? Or maybe I´m just tired
You described the environments very well, and the way you built up the suspense was really nice.
Not too spectacular when it came to MOCs though, but on the other hand there wasn´t really much to build for this story as it took place out in the forest
Good work anyways!
You described the environments very well, and the way you built up the suspense was really nice.
Not too spectacular when it came to MOCs though, but on the other hand there wasn´t really much to build for this story as it took place out in the forest
Good work anyways!
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Thanks!
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