Chapter 3.

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 5:58 pm

Chapter 3. This is a cool chapter I think. Please take a look and tell me what you think. Spelling is not perfect. http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=218886

kelderic · Post by **kelderic** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 3:38 am

It looks good, but is very hard to follow. It says they found Ben, and saved him, and that Antioch had fallen. The pictures illustating this were of them back at home, or so it seemed.

Kelderic

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:09 pm

Ya, I guess its a bit unclear. I will try to make it better in chapter 4.
Yes they were at home. They had found ben. And taken him back home.

sarous · Post by **sarous** » Wed Dec 20, 2006 5:28 pm

i had no clue what you wer doing

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:58 am

You could be a little more specific like "What i was doing that was unclear, and please you correct spelling and grammer.

sarous · Post by **sarous** » Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:08 pm

i did not understand the story line

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Sat Dec 23, 2006 6:05 pm

Hmm, maybe you should have read chapter 1 and 2. Oh well.