Chapter 3 is out

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Prince Imdol
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Chapter 3 is out

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Well I finished Chapter 3 and am now writing chapter four.
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Excellent chapter. The voice given to the characters is very fitting- the entire story is quite medieval. The names are reminiscent of Tolkien- the highest praise that can be issued.
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Post by Legendary_Corsair »

I could only read a few parts but I liked it.Great chapter. :idea:
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