Well, finally chapter 5 is out. For those of you who like romance chapters this is one you might like.
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CHapter 5 is out
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Kelderic really summed it up. It's difficult to make that kind of scene, but you did it perfectly. Another great chapter; I liked the end part, where you through some romantic essences into it.
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I couldn't agree more. Your romance was excellent in the story, but too much would turn it into a love story.Prince Imdol wrote:Thanks, there will be sprinkles of Romantic scenes spread throughout the story now and then, but too much ruins it.
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