TheBohrok wrote:All right, I have made my first contribution to the Roleplay!
If there are any tips you can give me to improve, please do.
Excellent post. Not the best ever seen, but quite good for an introduction.
What's more, you've got clean spelling and an easy mode of writing. Just what we want to see!
*And just as a note: To visit Orion during the celebrations, an invitation isn't necessary. That's only for getting into the Ball and the Dinner. And if you have no invitation, you don't come in. Therefore, while Bishkar will be attending the Ball and Banquet proper, Hernius will not (unless TheBohrok decides to either sneak him past security - and find there's one seat too few!!!- or to give him an invitation at a later date.
If anyone feels their good character (or bad) one, ought to have an escort, make sure they both have invitations! Otherwise, they can come to the doors, see all the sights, and share your hotel room, but they can't come to the main attraction.
Unless we get sneaky, of course...
