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The White Archer, My Contest entree.

Postby Lamanda2 » Wed Sep 27, 2006 1:30 pm

Well, here is a link to my Stort-Telling contest entree, the first thing i've ever written :D (Yes, I know it's only a comic)

http://www.freewebs.com/lamanda/abrotherlytrio1.htm

Click Page 1 first, as this is not really the first page.

PS- You can leave a rating if you want, the rating thing is at the bottom of the last page.

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Postby Lonan » Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:34 pm

Nice job on this one. It had some funny moments (particularly the orc encounter) and I like your use of pieces. It's very minimalist, but you always feel like the guys are really in the forest. Not easy to do when only using a small amount of elements. I liked it a lot.
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Postby kelderic » Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:06 pm

This is really good. Will there be a sequal?

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Postby Lamanda2 » Wed Sep 27, 2006 11:10 pm

Hey, thanks guys, I am glad you enjoyed it, I had alot of fun making it.

Nice job on this one. It had some funny moments (particularly the orc encounter)

Ah yes, my favorite scene is the one in which Adam is running off yelling, "Hit the deck!" :wink:

and I like your use of pieces. It's very minimalist, but you always feel like the guys are really in the forest. Not easy to do when only using a small amount of elements. I liked it a lot.

Yeah, I thought this would be a good way to do a comic, as I feel it should mainly revolve around the characters.

Will there be a sequal?

Yes, I am planning on doing more in the future, can't say as when though. :)

Again, thank you two for the nice comments.

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Postby Prince Imdol » Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:42 pm

Very cool. And i like you creation of the week. The Tower.


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Postby Lord Felix » Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:57 pm

Very Nicely done. What did you use for the back ground?
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Postby Lamanda2 » Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:46 pm

Very cool. And i like you creation of the week. The Tower.

Thanks.
I also enjoy Jojo's tower, the whole reason I picked it. Though since I havn't had much time to come online as of late it's more like the creation of the month. :wink:

Very Nicely done. What did you use for the back ground?

Thank you.
I just used a large piece of cardstock for the background.

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Postby sarous » Wed Dec 20, 2006 12:36 pm

you did your best (it was as pefect as a human could make)thats all that counts
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Postby kelderic » Fri Dec 22, 2006 12:11 am

sarous wrote:you did your best (it was as pefect as a human could make)thats all that counts


That sounds sort of condescending.

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Postby sarous » Fri Dec 22, 2006 1:07 pm

if only you could see inside my mind
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Postby babyjawa » Fri Dec 22, 2006 3:14 pm

I really enjoyed reading it!

Very simple looking, but still a very good story. I also like that it is in comic-form. (Easiest to read. :wink: )
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Postby Lord Bas » Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:49 pm

:lol: that 'fort' made me laugh! A few simple bricks in a tree (read: plant). Genius! The orc was fun too.
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