This is just a small book cover I made. It has all of the main characters, and some fill in characters. I Plan to put it on my cover of book one.
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Nice job. My only concern with your cover, is that you not see the characters in the background very clearly. Other than that. It looks good.
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That's very good. It has almost a Fellowship of the Ring feel to it.
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Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?
Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!
Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...
Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!
Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...
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ottoatm wrote:Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?
Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!
Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...
I am not entirely sure which one you mean. Is this in the book cover or in a Chapter? All the chapters have valid characters (I hope) and maybe you are talking about The Ostiten Paladin?
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I think he means the cover - the guy with the Vladek helmet.Prince Imdol wrote:ottoatm wrote:Not bad... there are quite a lot of characters on the cover, but you laid them out in a way that made it possible to tell who the main character was... and I assume those with smaller roles are the ones in the back or slightly obscured?
Overall, I'd say not bad at all. You've been publishing a lot for your story!
Just out of curiosity (I'm currently a few chapters behind in your story), is the man on the horse without a face on purpose? Not sure what kind of history/background he might have, or if that's just an error...
I am not entirely sure which one you mean. Is this in the book cover or in a Chapter? All the chapters have valid characters (I hope) and maybe you are talking about The Ostiten Paladin?
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He is not on a horse. Nor a white one. He is on 2 bricks 2 by 4 grey. Just so he is hovering over everyone like a daemon.
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"Sow a thought, reap an action;
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"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
"Sow a thought, reap an action;
Sow an action, reap a habit.
Sow a habit, reap a character.
Sow a character, reap a destiny"
"Don't let school interfere with your education."-Huckleberry Finn
That's the oneSir Kohran wrote:I think he means the cover - the guy with the Vladek helmet.
So the reason he has no facial features is because he's a demon?
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