Roaring Sun... part 2

Quickblade22 · Post by **Quickblade22** » Sun May 13, 2007 3:33 am

Hey all,
Part two of my epic story is up on my website. Check out Courage Chosen at http://quickblade22.tripod.com/id7.html .
Make sure you read part one if you haven't already. Questions and comments welcome.

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Sun May 13, 2007 12:40 pm

It does move a little fast in some parts, so I suggest slowing it down, but thats just the kind of writing I like to read, and it really depends on who you are. I like it to be slow and sweet, except in battle scenes.

P.I

Quickblade22 · Post by **Quickblade22** » Wed May 16, 2007 10:34 pm

Yea, it does seem to go fast in some parts. The reason is that when I began writing this story, it was supposed to take place about 24 years after the events you are reading. So essentially, I have 24 years of events to lead up to. I have an outline for it, but have only about 1 "chapter" worth of material written. Thanks for taking the time.

Prince Imdol · Post by **Prince Imdol** » Wed May 16, 2007 10:38 pm

You have a cool story coming. Can't Wait.

P.I

DARKspawn · Post by **DARKspawn** » Sat May 26, 2007 3:02 am

Great so far (haven't read Chapter 3 yet) I like how it is more dialouge driven than narrative. Can't wait for the pics