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Mystery Ship

Postby TheBrickster » Wed Sep 05, 2007 4:40 am

I'm currently hosting a mystery story called Mystery Ship on Eurobricks (EB). The mystery can be found in different parts on EB's Trains & Town Forum: http://eurobricks.hosting.ipsyn.com/euroforum/index.php?s=b99e72a8e4468560ab4476634bb82848&showforum=9

Here's a copy of the Sneak Peek poster: http://members.cox.net/govman4/Mystery%20Ship/MysteryShipPoster1.jpg

And a bit about the story:

A ghostly fog has engulfed the transport ship Sea Ghost that carries a mysterious cargo en route to Europe. Within the darkness of a vast sea, ten crewmen will be challenged with a frightening mystery. Only aboard the Mystery Ship will the true secrets be revealed.

I'd invite any of you to read along, but only participants may post on the various threads.
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Postby Prince Imdol » Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:15 pm

A great start. I like the photoshoped images. You could teach me some stuff on that too. A good amount of description too.


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Postby Tower of Iron Will » Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:37 pm

Great job so far. Keep it going. Reminds me of an "X-files" episode aboard an old Russian freighter...
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Postby venvorskar » Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:34 am

I just finished part 1 and I think it's very good! I really like how the members play their characters.

And I think you should add a reflection/shadow for the boat and change the lighting on the ship MOC itself so that it's coming from behind the ship instead of in front of it.
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Postby TheBrickster » Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:46 pm

Thanks for the tip V, but that's a little above my skill level. In time perhaps.
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