Comic, Issue III

Luís · Post by **Luís** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 7:56 pm

Though they seem to not have alot of success, here is issue three of my comic. I hope you enjoy.
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=279303
Luís

DNL · Post by **DNL** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:11 pm

very nice!
it's becoming an interesting story, i cant wait to see the next part!

HeartOfDarkness · Post by **HeartOfDarkness** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:38 pm

Ooh, this is starting to get interesting. However, the text is kind of hard to see, and the second and third pics are switched around. Otherwise, good work!

smcginnis · Post by **smcginnis** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:54 pm

This is a very nice series, but I agree with Heart of Darkness about the text. The second one's pretty funny.

The music I'm listening to right now (Symphony No. 3 by Alberic Magnard on radioioClassical) really works with this comic.... Makes it feel like a (well done) fantasy movie.

~smcginnis

Adam · Post by **Adam** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 9:42 pm

DNL wrote:very nice!
it's becoming an interesting story, i cant wait to see the next part!

what he said.

ottoatm · Post by **ottoatm** » Fri Oct 12, 2007 3:04 am

I agree, this was probally the best one so far because it adds a bit of mystery to the story and hints at a bit of fate/questing for the hero. Cool~

The words are a bit hard to read, but if you can't fix that it's OK. Oh, and the pics are out of order too, although that also was not a huge deal.

Nice~