Jellybean--Chapter 4
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Jellybean--Chapter 4
Some of you may remember when I attempted a story last year. I got through three chapters, started planning the fourth, but never made it to the end product.
Fifteen months later, I'm proud to say that Jellybean, Chapter 4 is now available for reading. I feel it's my best installment yet to the story, and would greatly appreciate you clicking the pic and giving it a go.
And in case you're new to the story or you need to be reminded of what's going on, here are the first three chapters:
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2
3
Fifteen months later, I'm proud to say that Jellybean, Chapter 4 is now available for reading. I feel it's my best installment yet to the story, and would greatly appreciate you clicking the pic and giving it a go.
And in case you're new to the story or you need to be reminded of what's going on, here are the first three chapters:
1
2
3
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Looool. I really missed these.
It's funnier than ever. I loved how Frodo (I think so) freaked out at them.
Please hurry with the next instalment.
It's funnier than ever. I loved how Frodo (I think so) freaked out at them.
Please hurry with the next instalment.
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Tehe! Great job, Nathan!
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Thanks, everyone! With comments like this, I think Chapter 5 should be quick in coming.
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A true story:
A fren of mine was preparing to buy the KK chess set when he saw the baby blue troops he decided against it. So they need to get rid of it true enough which I am glad they did.
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But enigma dude you gotta work on your camera focus a little bit, the main speaking character are out of focus in lots of the frames. Other than that it is flawless.
A true story:
A fren of mine was preparing to buy the KK chess set when he saw the baby blue troops he decided against it. So they need to get rid of it true enough which I am glad they did.
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But enigma dude you gotta work on your camera focus a little bit, the main speaking character are out of focus in lots of the frames. Other than that it is flawless.
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Thanks, Fry! The focus was my biggest frustration in this whole project; I'm actually investing in some better lighting before I make the next chapter. I've found that that helps quite a bit. I've also been looking into a new camera, but I don't think that will happen for a while since I'll be leaving sometime next year and won't have access to my Lego for two years. Though, depending on finances, I think I may even be able to swing that before too long.Fry_slayer wrote:But enigma dude you gotta work on your camera focus a little bit, the main speaking character are out of focus in lots of the frames. Other than that it is flawless.
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Yeah the new lighting really helps.
I dont see the need for a new camera friend, current one is fine enough.
IMO you just need to move your camera slightly further away from the subjects and crop them out later. Hope this helps
I dont see the need for a new camera friend, current one is fine enough.
IMO you just need to move your camera slightly further away from the subjects and crop them out later. Hope this helps
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Ah, I forgot about cropping!Fry_slayer wrote:I dont see the need for a new camera friend, current one is fine enough.
IMO you just need to move your camera slightly further away from the subjects and crop them out later. Hope this helps
You just saved me a lot of money, Fry.
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Hillarious. Glad to see the story didn't die off...
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