Here are some Haiku poems I wrote. Haiku poetry has strict construction rules - each poem has only 17 syllables; 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, 5 in the third. Feel free to post your own!
LUGNET dot space group
is in a lot of trouble
Castle has arrived.
C-C dot com rocks!
"Why is that you say?" you say
C-C does not crash
New Jellybean Knights
make me puke. Much Brasso and
paint will be their fate.
Black Falcons kick butt!
Agree with me, Jojo does.
We want more Falcons!
Why do the Wolfpack
have only two small, cool sets?
They should get more.
PLMKWYT!
The source for all your LEGO Castle needs
LEGO Castle Haiku
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LEGO Castle Haiku
by Lord_Of_The_LEGO » Fri Apr 30, 2004 8:29 am
In the process of converting to Flickr.
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by Sir Terrance » Fri May 07, 2004 11:08 pm
Yes, but Haiku's are supposed to talk about nature. Oh well! 
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by forester3291 » Thu May 13, 2004 7:00 am
Lego is cool and
that's why I say megabloks
are gonna go down
Beware minifig
The vacuum and dog don't take
Kindly to plastic
Don't weep minifig
I won't cut you. But I will
put stickers on you
My sister crushes
my castle down to the floor
I will rebuild it
that's why I say megabloks
are gonna go down
Beware minifig
The vacuum and dog don't take
Kindly to plastic
Don't weep minifig
I won't cut you. But I will
put stickers on you
My sister crushes
my castle down to the floor
I will rebuild it
Space rocks.
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by moom » Thu May 13, 2004 3:15 pm
Sir Terrance wrote:Yes, but Haiku's are supposed to talk about nature.
Does this one bend the rule sufficiently?
Belville, Scala and
Fabuland are LEGO themes
that provide us food
With friendly greetings, M. Moolhuysen.
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by moom » Sun May 16, 2004 5:52 am
I think that Lord_Of_The_LEGO's fourth (last) Haiku and forester3291's second and fourth (last) Haiku are the best ones the've written, these realy have the Haiku mood.
With friendly greetings, M. Moolhuysen.
With friendly greetings, M. Moolhuysen.
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by Rubberchickenknight » Sun May 16, 2004 5:01 pm
moom, you forgot Jack Stone in your haiku
"When you are wrestling for possession of a sword, the man with the handle always wins." - Neal Stephenson, Snow Crash
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by Rubberchickenknight » Mon May 17, 2004 2:20 am
Henry Haiku
Henry is cool guy
He is C-C's mascot 'fig
He travels to homes
Of AFOLs
And sometimes TFOLs
And lego builders
Our sigfigs welcome him
Take him to cool famous place
Then send to next guy
i think i put an extra syllable on last haiku
"When you are wrestling for possession of a sword, the man with the handle always wins." - Neal Stephenson, Snow Crash
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by Robin Hood » Tue May 18, 2004 4:10 pm
Sounds good all of them. I think there good anyway. I find Haiku poems boring, even when they talk about lego.
I build, therefore I am.
Brave words coming from a guy called grapenuts.
Brave words coming from a guy called grapenuts.
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by Daimyo » Fri May 28, 2004 9:46 am
TLC needs better designers
If not soon lose money
They will
Lawsuit changes grey colors
Megabloks will not win
Lego is greedy.
If not soon lose money
They will
Lawsuit changes grey colors
Megabloks will not win
Lego is greedy.
"Alright Kif, let's show these freaks what a bloated, runaway military budget can do"
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