The Kingdom of Norabando: The People's Destiny

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Great work Graynar. I can't wait to read more. My favorite character is the crownie with the plant for a helmet. :)
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Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming :)

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary? :?

- Matt
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Thanks for the replies everyone! They are greatly appreciated! :D
Sir Kohran wrote:Great stuff. Your script is excellent and I like your backgrounds and photography. Keep it coming :)

Only thing I'd question is the use of 'prick' in chapter one...was that word really necessary? :?

- Matt
Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive then the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter. :?

Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead. :P
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Well I could have used a milder word, but I don't see how the use of that word was more offencive
It just took me out of the flow of the story for a little bit; it didn't seem in keeping with your style up until then. Not a big deal.
the bloody death of the worker. Or the severed hand for that matter.
Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.
Maybe I should have used the word "Brick" instead.
:lol:

- Matt
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You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.

Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?
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Well yes, but these are just in Lego form.
True, true. :P
You know what dude, I just read this again and appreciated it even more the second time. These are awesome. I especially love Nobalz intro and his name. Haha! Nobalz.
Haha, glad you liked it!
Please don't stop there! When do we to see another installment!?
I don't intend on stopping, but I will be unable to work on it for the rest of August. Unfortunately, 10 hour days at work are eating up all my time. But I should continue again full time in September. :wink:
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Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

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siabur wrote:Just curious, what software are you doing your comic with? If you need some tips on graphics just ask, myself and hubby dable a bit with lego based comics as well. You've done a great job. The story is fun.

Niki
Hey, thanks for the reply! :D

I use a free downloadable photoshop called the Gimp for all my special effects and picture editing and I use MS Paint for the speech bubbles and text.
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Good news guys, you can watch the General Nobalz trailer on Youtube!

http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=-3er67f5Ey0

Hope you enjoy it! :D
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These are really good! I love them! Nobalz lol!
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Here is chapter 3 guys! Hope you enjoy it! Also note, like the other chapters, there is some swearing.

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Comments are appreciated!
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Very nice work! I'm too lazy to be specific about what I liked :tasty: but it was a nice read and the illustrations are very rich. I hope you keep at it.

PS: I don't know why but I really liked the big clock in the outpost room.
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lego in a comic
revolutionary.
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This is a great story. Its hilarious.

B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim. :?
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Thanks for the replies everyone!
B.T.W. I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but the youtube video has been taken off due to a copyright claim.
Wow that sucks...I didn't even recieve a message that it had been removed -I had no idea is was gone. Soon I won't have any videos left on Youtube. :lol:
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