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Postby Calculus3.14 » Sat May 26, 2012 7:59 pm

Here is my Character Introduction Challenge for LCC. Any feedback and/or critique is very welcome.

Raised in a monastery, Horatius trained with many melee weapons, but he prefers to use only his hands. He was also taught the important subjects of riding, arithmetic, writing, economy, the history of Roawia, along with many other things.
When Horatius was sixteen, equipped with the knowledge from the monastery, he left his childhood home to find his way in the land of Loreos. Sometime after, while he was resting in the shade along the road with one of his favorite books, he suddenly heard a cry for help. Rushing toward the sound, Horatius found a man’s cart tipped on its side with its contents spread about. Outlaws were everywhere. Using his combative skills with his hands, Horatius fought the Outlaws alone. When the barbarous Outlaws had fled, he waited until the man came to his senses. Then, as the man came to his senses, Horatius told him what had happened. Horatius discovered that the man he had saved was a wealthy nobleman. This magnate was named Augustus Desertwind, who proceeded to take Horatius back to his estate where he rewarded him with many riches and also introduced Horatius to the life of a merchant. Because the magnate had no children of his own, he adopted Horatius as his own son. Horatius is now full heir to all of Augustus’ possessions, and now sells his father’s merchandises to the citizens of Roawia.

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Re: LCC-CIC-Receiving Rewards

Postby mencot » Sun May 27, 2012 11:00 am

First welcome to LCC and Loreos.
Great introduction story :D and alos a very good job on the moc. It goes well with the story. looking forward seeing your other mocs
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Re: LCC-CIC-Receiving Rewards

Postby AK_Brickster » Tue May 29, 2012 10:42 am

Really interesting story. Also, this is a nice intro MOC. Not to big, not to small. Lots of faction-specific coloring. Great job!
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Re: LCC-CIC-Receiving Rewards

Postby Blego7 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:55 am

Lovely work on the color choices. Also, the fig posing is well done.
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