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I'm currently working on two Photologs chronicling the rise and fall on two of my characters, Ibsen Nyatar and Ibsen Nyatar II. As soon as I am done, I will edit this post to include them.
An update- Instead of a Nyatar story, I'm doing the chronicles of Danju. Sounds bad, but it is so far chock-full of battle and stuff.
"Alright Kif, let's show these freaks what a bloated, runaway military budget can do"
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Here is a synopsis and a list of the leading players.
Long ago in the Kingdom of Finhow, the Blue Flame Clan battled with the evil Red Ronin for control of the kingdom. The ronin were led by the demon Vlad, and a Dark Summoner named Ubastis. In the ancient temple of Jinan, just as the ronin were on the verge of victory, the summoner Exzaro came in the form of a stone warrior, and drove them back to the Nethergarde. Now, a new arm yof ronin have banded together under the leadership of the Black Knight, Vladek.
Main Players:
Danju the Violet: A knight from Osman, Danju came to the ravaged kingdom of Dunhar to meet with the Princep Dorsis and destroy the Scarlet invaders. Wise, well-trained, and brave, he fights for what is right.
Aron: An Outrider warrior who joined the Dunharin army and serves the Princep. He is a fine spearman and is Danju's escort.
Angus: A resistance fighter who wields a Scarlet repeating musket. Angus is boisterous and rowdy, but he keeps a cool head in battle and is a good shot. He is also Danju's escort.
Gim the Highwayman: A robber and highwayman who carries a wheel-lock gun and wears a plumed hat he swiped off a troubadour. Gim is worth at least 1000 darii and is a dangerous and unpredictable opponent.
Olivaus the Undertaker: Olivaus is a quiet and undiscerning undertaker who was once a knight. He seldomly speaks and only rides his coffins into town, otherwise staying in recluse.
Ivan the Bull: An ex-cavalryman in Cedric's army, Ivan was without a job after the war, so he decided to ride about doing good deeds. Though he almost always asks for payment after he has completed his task, he has a good heart and a strong will.
Burg the Blacksmith: After his village was destroyed by Vladek's ronin, Burg took up his warhammer and has since wandered the land searching for Vladek. He is by far the strongest man in Dunhar, or so he claims.
Vladek the Black Knight: A mysterious warrior who vows to destroy Dunhar in order to raise the demon Vlad.
Ubastis the Dark Summoner: Even more mysterious than Vladek, this cloaked and hooded sorcerer is a powerful and evil individual.

Pics up soon!
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Post by Emperor James »

I geuss its good for synopsis. However, i would much prefer you remove the guns, as a repeating musket and wheel lock are anything but medeival, or remove the knights, as they are very medeival. I would rather you removed the guns, as I prefer the middle ages myself.
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Well, my world is quasi-medieval.
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As long as this makes no pretensions of being "historical" (and it doesn't, BTW), it sounds great. I like it!

You have turned a Jellybean fairy-tale into an interesting story. Good job.
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Part One: City Under Siege is halfway done. Iam working with Trevman jointly on this, last thing to do is get a BS account.
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Good news... After a long slump, the Chronicles of Danju is being reactivated, and Part One will be finished soon!
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