The Sorceror's Return
- The Hordesman
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The Sorceror's Return
Okay, this post has been a little messy but now its fixed.
Updated map:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/TheHo ... egomap.jpg
Story folder:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=128350
Remember that many of these are minor characters and some of the more important ones has not been added there yet.
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=130137
It is not completely serious, since, well, its lego.
The story itself is what you can be used to (especially in its anime ways) when it comes to middleages/fantasy. Its a sort of mix between every castle theme you could say.
Warning: Very mild swearings!
1:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815
2:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=133055
3:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=134192
4:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=138651
5:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=139950
6:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1451345
7:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1622604
8:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=173760
9:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=175421
Updated map:
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/TheHo ... egomap.jpg
Story folder:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=128350
Remember that many of these are minor characters and some of the more important ones has not been added there yet.
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=130137
It is not completely serious, since, well, its lego.
The story itself is what you can be used to (especially in its anime ways) when it comes to middleages/fantasy. Its a sort of mix between every castle theme you could say.
Warning: Very mild swearings!
1:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815
2:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=133055
3:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=134192
4:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=138651
5:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=139950
6:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1451345
7:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=1622604
8:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=173760
9:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=175421
Last edited by The Hordesman on Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:43 pm, edited 13 times in total.
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Looks like you put a lot of thought into your characters... that, I think, is the first step towards a great story!
I'll be looking forward to more postings then -
I'll be looking forward to more postings then -
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Actually, the blue color is "morcian blue", as seen on the castle flags and tower spires, etc. I thought the dark teal looked oceanic and not easily mistaken for land, but I may change the map later.TheOrk wrote:Interesting, I'll add it to the big list! I(ME) think that you should switch the colours around on the map. The sea should be blue and Morcia bley
Actually, I may make the first chapter sooner, but then I will need some heavy image editing...
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Your map is very good. I like the MegaBloks land in the corner. Your characters are also good and I can't wait for the story! I intend to make one(a lego story) myself someday.....
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Good news! The first chapter is done and will be released as soon Ive fixed the pictures!
That is, today or tomorrow! Hurray!
That is, today or tomorrow! Hurray!
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Nice. I can't wait to read it!
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When public:
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815
Okay the chapter isnt complete yet, and the "to be continued" picture is pretty crappy, and yes, the pics may be updated later on, but atleast its well, the first chapter!
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=132815
Okay the chapter isnt complete yet, and the "to be continued" picture is pretty crappy, and yes, the pics may be updated later on, but atleast its well, the first chapter!
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A new story!!! SWEEEET!!!! I'm gonna go read it right now! Thanks man - I love LEGO stories!
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Reuploading since they werent in the right order. If brickshelf gets moderated next time tomorrow, you will also see some new stuff happening.
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yea, I noticed that... it threw me off for a second there -
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Well, if you check the shield you see that the cavalryman is one of the knight's men... Yes, that naked dude is pretty crazy indeed... I think he looked pretty grim(and scottish?), so i thought it would be fun making him say that, not to be misunderstood!DarkDotDotDotMan wrote:Hmm... Good story. I absolutly love the little details you added, like how the armor bearer said his job was heavy but easy, and how the guy with the pike killed his own comrade and ... *Checks the story* ... Is that a neikked guy saying "Who want's some?" ?
... Love the story! Please update!
Nice that you like it Next chapter will be released within some days perhaps...
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I just read through it, and I commend you. Good use of comic relief during the battle; some of those things sound like something I would say! Nice work, and I can't wait for the next update.
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